Reviews for The First Time
LawlAdorkableTurtles chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
This is marvelous, really. It was well written and the take on the human Doctor's perspective was brilliantly done. Excellent job with this - I really enjoyed it :)
KelseyO chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
"Haven't slept since the dawn of creation," he says impressively. "Didn't want to miss any more dawns that good." This line made me smile (after the moment it took for me to understand it; I'm still a bit tired, I guess? GET IT TOGETHER, KELSEY.)

"She leans over a vidscreen, and for a second he nearly expects her to whip out a pair of spectacles. (He tries not to be disappointed when she doesn't.)" becaus Oh my god the bit with them making out on the couch was the most precious thing I could read that over and over and over again

"Quite right, too" jfc

Leah, you need t .

(no)
Sourdoughtoast chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
This one is amazing as well. It definitely makes me feel, you know? And it's happy! What a concept.
tomboy 26 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Ok, I'm warning you .. you're gonna get a lot of reviews from me cause I just found your other Doctor/Rose stories and I am going through them with a smile on my face and a happy heart.

This is just amazing. The way you capture each Doctor incarnation, the way Rose just comes to life .. honestly, I am in love with this fic. Truly in love lol.
one.twilight.sun chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
So cute. Adorable and loved it. Found the beginning part a little confusing but once we got to 10 and 10.5 it all straightened out.

She leans over a vidscreen, and for a second he nearly expects her to whip out a pair of spectacles. (He tries not to be disappointed when she doesn't.) - loved this line. So Doctor.
Angela Jewell chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
So incredibly cute. Another great one! ;)
MissFictionPrincess chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Cute! :)

-Hailey
bellefantastique chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Loved this! Loved Rose being a BAMF in the office and hormonal!Doctor. :P
Rose of Zakarisz chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Awesome, wonderful, molto bene! I love the way that you write Rose and the Doctor.
Miss Snazzy chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
It seems Rose will always want the Doctor...whether she's human or dog. Lol. Another good one.
Zchocolatebunniesrulezworld chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
So I loved the bit at the beginning, with your analysis of the Doctor's thoughts behind his actions in those episodes. Methinks 'twas perfectly in-character, and my goodness the sweetness of them sleeping together! X)

And then I loved the middle, with the Doctor just learning to cope with being human and all those insistant hormonal desires ;D Rose was absolutely fabulous in Torchwood; of course she'd never settle down as a housewife or anything.

"Rose Tyler: Defender of the Earth!" and all. (And oh my god, she'd look adorable in Tennant's spectacles! :3)

*AAAND*, I loved the end, with an adorkably awkward first attempt being interrupted by Rose the dog (and Jackie not far behind?). *And then more sweetness* aww...I adore how Rose mimicked him with the 'quite right' :) Didn't quite catch the reference you were making with "close enough", though -.- Must rewatch series 1-4 now...

What I didn't love was the lack of line breaks between the scenes, but that was probably due to FFNet's annoying habit of taking them out. DX
Butterflygirl113 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
This is absolutely brilliant and adorable and wonderful and sweet and all sorts of positive, gushing adjectives! I haven't even seen that many episodes of Doctor Who, but I LOVE your writing of it. I noticed, while reading, that your writing flows so smoothly and fluidly, and had the rather fanciful thought that it's MUSICAL. I don't know how text can be musical, but you've managed it, and it's beautiful and awe-inspiring to read. Just gorgeous; like the words are singing to you. Thank you so much for writing!
Laura x Tennant chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Lovely :)I love the bit where he tries to get her to stop laughing at him
AKA Hummer chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Utterly lovely and sweet. I love your Doctor Who fics!