|Reviews for The Black Leaves|
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/2
Steel and virgin maiden hair? WTF hair is hair an infant could break hair no problem and the strongest steel well steel is still steel no mater how strong and venom damages metals far stronger than steel in canon so chains made of steel and hair makes no sense at all get rid of the other symbiotes it over complicates what could be an amazing story
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/2
Venom has an almost complete invulnerability to the sonic sounds that weaken it due to exposure and stealing and copying carnages sonic defenses and has also gained a near invulnerbility to heat and fire it also gains the unique powers and abilities of anyoneand anything it consumes (like the tech agent venom consumes) and being bonded to so many hosts would only increase its intelligence not make him like a wild beast this story has so much potential but you need to take out the other symbiotes and have venom arrive through an interdeminsional rift of some sort
| Aurora Wesker - Dark Fox Lord chapter 5 . 3/26
You know you keep saying that have so much power even out of their Level 2 form and yet I do not see it.
Venom got his ass handed to him pretty easily.
I don't expect anything different, you Kishimoto loving piece of shit.
| Aurora Wesker - Dark Fox Lord chapter 1 . 3/16
I agree on that Naruto and Lisa pairing, why don't you try it though? I know I saw one before but I think the butt-fuck wannabe Admins had it deleted or something cause I can't find it anymore.
| Battlesny chapter 14 . 3/4
Wow I am completely retarded. It took me this long to realize this wasn't just some 2-3 piece crossover. Even if the Metroid and Spiderman didn't clue it in, I really should have gotten it when Mizuki got automail.
| Battlesny chapter 8 . 3/4
are Venom and Metriod supposed to be related? I never bothered to learn about either of them, Venom cause I don't read american comics and Metroid cause it's sci-fi, so all I know is that Venom is from Spiderman and Metroid is the name of the game Samus in Smash Bros. came from.
| Battlesny chapter 7 . 3/4
if she hasn't used the chloroform yet why worry about it :)
| Deathborn chapter 26 . 2/17
You, as a writer, do not get a free pass to skimp on details just because of events that happened in cannon.
This is lazy writing at its worst, and it frustrates me because of the potential this story has.
| The Hero named Villan chapter 9 . 2/16
evil tyrant of pervyness, cannot stop the villainous hero of pervyness.
prepare for mortal kombat.
| Deathborn chapter 19 . 2/16
Far to much telling and not enough showing, and the spelling and grammatical errors persist. I feel that these a crippling what would otherwise be a very enjoyable fic.
| Deathborn chapter 18 . 2/16
Please, put your dialogue, in quotes where they belong! For all of our sakes.
| Deathborn chapter 16 . 2/16
The myriad of spelling and grammatical errors within this story are really weighing it down I think.
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 42 . 2/15
I'm glad Naruto got Washu to agree to come to help Nightmare without having to hurt anyone at the house, I love the Tenchi cast and would hate to see some of them hurt. Naruto hiding the porn magazine's around the house was interesting, and Ayeka apparently enjoying them makes me think she should just settle for sharing Tenchi with Ryoko.
The defeat of the namby pampy prince who I don't ever bother remembering the name of was hilarious, as was Naruto getting a mountain of sweets shipped in to keep him fed.
| thor94 chapter 42 . 2/15
prankster naruto come back.
| ZyiareHellsing chapter 42 . 2/15
Thanks for the great update! Man reading this makes me want to read watch tenchi universe.