Reviews for Special Delivery
MstgSzy chapter 43 . 5/21/2018
I found one of your stories on another author's 'Favorite Stories' list, so decided to give them a read. I read your shorter story and enjoyed it so much that I decided to go ahead and read 'Special Delivery' even though it wasn't marked 'Complete'. Though disappointed that it's not complete, I did want to let you know how much I enjoyed reading it. I found the 'voices' of the characters to be accurate. There's a lot going on in this story and for me I found that you've done a great job of keeping all those balls in the air. Given the amount of time that has passed since your last update, I suspect that you have moved on from Bones Fan Fiction. However, if you should get that itch again, I strongly encourage you to revisit 'Special Delivery'. I most definitely would like to see how you bring this all to a conclusion. Note: One other've been very clever in hiding the identity of the 'mole' could be one of several people...that's great writing.
Adelled chapter 43 . 1/30/2016
Thanks for writing. Quite a ride.
happybonehead chapter 43 . 8/13/2015
Please try to complete this story - I know it will still be a good read after 43 chapters -
Avalonemyst chapter 43 . 12/1/2012
Please continue!
Siess chapter 43 . 4/4/2011
Zach! (It's Zach, by the way. 'Cause his name is Zacharia so it would be 'h' instead of 'k') Thank you soooooo much for bringing him in! Haha I loooove Zach! I mean, who doesn't? I hope they all get to speak with him. (: And that Bass gets to hear from the (amazing) missing family member.

I am a huge fan of this story :D It's great and I can't wait for more.

Update soon! (:
laffers18 chapter 43 . 3/26/2011
Finally got all caught up!

I love this has just the right about of suspense, intrigue, mystery and action with some friendly banter/hints of romance thrown in.

Just how i like it!
RK chapter 43 . 3/18/2011
Hi Solo, i just caught up with this fic. i hope you will update and continue..
Damariz chapter 43 . 3/9/2011
Wonderful story! well designed! Please can you continue...
Should'veSeenThatComing chapter 43 . 1/31/2011
Please update great story and plot but need the rescue scene soon or I'll go nuts;)
Missymappy chapter 43 . 1/31/2011
It would be really cool if you brought dr brennans dad into it
injatheninja chapter 42 . 1/30/2011
You brightened my day when you brought Zack into the picture! Literally have been dying to see him show up. Case like this has dr addy written all over it! Please keep him involved
injatheninja chapter 43 . 1/30/2011
I like the story but am having a hard time staying motivated enough to read it. Very long chapters with lots of filler details make me wanna skip over them to get to the dialogue which really seems to be the only thing that gives us information about what's going on. Kinda leaving us in the dark here with all the other important facts unaddressed. Very frustrating after reading 43 chapters. Though I admire you're attention to detail I must admit that I am struggling to find them as useful.

Also, your repetitive use of the color of peoples eyes and other phrases I can't think of right now deter from their significance and uniqueness. Please add more dialogue. I really like the ideas behind this story so please don't make me abandon it.

I hope my criticism isn't too harsh! I don't mean it maliciously. I really do like the story and can't wait for more
mendenbar chapter 43 . 1/30/2011
I still do not trust Ms. Cason as far as I can throw a stone at her. Cullen and Tyler don't seem too concerned that they have a mole who could be corrupting all their current plans. AND Cullen knows Booth. I suspect collusion between him and Booth, since, as Bass pointed out, Cullen left Booth with an "out." Glad to see you haven't forgotten us with this. This case is very, very interesting.
irishleesh93 chapter 43 . 1/30/2011
Can't wait for more. I hope we get to see a chapter of Brennan soon.
irishleesh93 chapter 42 . 1/30/2011
Yay Zack, I hope he and Hodgins can put somethings together.
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