This is perfection!

Still so beautiful and intense.. I can't wait to read the next installment story.. I hope you eventually let them have love..

Interesting thoughts between the pair... Well written and quite well done. :)

They feel so inevitable. Them together.

aaaaaaaaaaah MOOOOORRRREEEEEE!

Ooh... so fluffy! You do a very good job of capturing the emotions, I get very wrapped up in the story, and it's fun to read, and believable. I look forward to reading the sequel. :)

Lovely, lovely, _lovely_ scenery - but you skip between tenses here ("He glanced.." - "He is.." etc). I'm rather fond of present tense ;), think you should go over it and change the sentences with past tense into that. Or the other way around, just make it all the same. Otherwise I adore (naturally).

Aww. So sweet. I loved it. (this means you have to upload the sequel, ok?) :D

*sigh* love it. It's so wonderfully detailed in the emotions. I love how they both know this, but neither can say. It's so heartbreaking and heartbreak makes for great story telling and characters. Each time I read a part of your story I kept thinking, "Why couldn't he have just kissed her properly once!" lol wonderful writing. Love!

Again, a totally amazing analysis of the Doctor and Rose.

Your stories are beautifully written, I have to say, and you've got the emotions of both of them spot on, it feels like you know them personally.

Another beautiful scene, thank you for sharing it with us!

I really love this! You've got both of them spot on and their emotions are just right. I can easily see this fitting into the actual series.

Can't wait for more stories from you!

my response is most certainly positive! gotta love some Ten/Rose love! :P

I love it :) "Just good friends". Really, really, *really* good friends?

Really an excellent job...beautifully written with the perfect tempo...you do such a good job with showing how they dance with each other mirroring each others thoughts and feelings...I have really enjoyed both of your stories and look forward to more!