Reviews for The Summer Of Our Discontent
I just like comedy chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
That was... A tad disturbing but very, very funny.

Your characters are perfect for Dream Mode and Max reacts PERFECTLY.

There are alot of punctuation and grammar mistakes. Fix them. It makes this story horribly hard to read.

Other than that, like everyone says, Update and write more. Your other writing has proved to be genuinely stunning. It makes me laugh and melts my heart as some of it taps into some buried emotions.

Continue this story because in the past, you will find that everything you have learned now will be so advanced that naivety might make you laugh from this story.

Sorry if I was brutal at all, I try not to be for good/funny stories.

~ Arrra
ThunderClouds7 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
AWESOME! moremoremoremoremore!
smile through the pain chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
HILARIOUS! I LOVED IT! EVERY word, scenario, PUNCTUATION ERROR, jk, was AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE! oh and you might want to go a little slower with the dream process. if possible.