Reviews for Onesided and forbidden
pepoluan chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Whoa! This fic is... heavy.

I would've bawled if I'm not reading this in a jam-packed public bus. Have to fight the tears with deep breathing.

Very sad story. But a good one. You captured the angst in her perfectly, and successfully projected that to the audience.

I applauds.
Gray Spectre Warden Boom chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
This story really affected me deeply...
Candle in the Night chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Damn that was deep. Nice work, it really captured the tortured renegade well.
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
pretty damn depressing. a character death warning would've been nice
BlackSantaMan chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
BAW! My heart is breaking so bad right now, make it stop!

Seriously though, you definitely packed a lot of emotional wallop in this, and the end was simply crushing. You nailed the feeling of unrequited love so well. The ending was so powerful. Well done.