Reviews for Convergence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Why is this labeled as a Tony story when he's barely in it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame you haven't finished this as you left it at just the beginning of the investigation. Also wanting to know how Jack knows Tony's father and uncle. Also, if this is set in season 8 for NCIS, than Tony would have been a NCIS agent for 10 years. And remember that Stan Burley was on Gibbs' team for 5 years before Gibbs met Tony and recruited him to NCIS. |
![]() ![]() Tony isn't vala's half brother, right? Tony is O'Neill's son? Alien? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() excellent |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very unfortunate place to leave this. I appreciate being able to read what you did wrute, though. It's very good :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well it has been five years, but if you do continue, I would love to read it. |
![]() ![]() Great and very promising start. I hope you'll continue this story. |
![]() ![]() I just have to say that Carson is not British but Scottish. Glasgow is the largest city in Scotland. While both countries are in the United Kingdom there are separate countries. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wondering if you are going to carry on with this as I would love to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() (I posted a brief review of chapter 5 a while back, then wrote this one later. Since I couldn't post another review at chapter 5, it's here instead.) I see that your muse for this story popped in briefly and then headed back out! I would really like to see where this goes, so I hope it comes back for a longer stay soon; it's been more than a year since you added to this story, though I see that some others have been added and/or updated. I like the interactions between the two teams and I'm hoping for some interaction between Tony and Teyla (maybe she won't smack him down) and between Ziva and Teyla (both female warriors); Ziva and Ronon could be fun too. So many possibilities! |
![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() you have a lot of discontinued stories. is Convergence going to be finished. it's good as far as it goes, but it's been a while since it was updated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you can update more. What is up with Vance? |