|Reviews for Three Times Shikaku Caught Inoichi|
| STAILS565 chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Please, continue, I LOVE IT, There's so little of this pairing, There is, please, continue.
| shourin chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
This story is nice. dramatic and nice.
| Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
AAARGH my god I can't believe I never spotted this before! I've read lots of your fics before, but somehow this one slipped under my radar...I'm so glad I decided to nose around and see what you were writing thee days.
This was gorgeous, and wonderful, and it's a crime that you've had so little feedback for it. I can see the dynamic working - or, in fact not working, long term - and the way you presented it was lovely.
I'm definitely keeping a closer eye on your writing habits in future...it's over a year since I first read 'Holding Out For a Hero' along with an Ino/Jir fic which I now can't find, and a whole pile of other oneshots. Your writing always flows beautifully, and I think I'm going to keep a closer eye on what you produce in future.
Sorry for the ramble, and thanks you so much for sharing your writing!
| SammyQuill chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Aww, that's so adorable. And I guess I like Inoichi as a sort of a jerk. I mean, he IS Ino's father, after all.
I liked your stint with Yaoi. I'm having trouble with my own Orochimaru/Jiraiya in that threesome I mentioned. So far I have Jiraiya's fingers in Orochimaru's hair - that's it. *blush*
| Small Fox chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Now I'm sorry if I'm wrong, but I'm guessing your a female. It's just something in your writing. Anyway overall it was pretty good. I particularly liked the image of an angry squirrel. As for the relationship itself it was okay. It just sort of happened, but the story really wasn't about the relationship.
| kitari66 chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Aww for a first attempt that was great! In all honesty it's rather hard to write shonen-ai for a series like Naruto (one most dominently populated by boy-girl relationships) I must again sing your praises for this story although a bit disheartening it still managed to make me smile even if it was bittersweet!
| Maerchen Freunde chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
I liked it, and I think it's a pretty realistic depiction of what happens between young boys who are experimenting with sexuality. And, damn, Inoichi is just as hot as his daughter! Very good.
| top chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Angst, but much more lighthearted than some of your other stuff has been of late. The last line was a bit much for me and really I think the interesting part was far glost over. Which is how exactly do you go from being romantically involved with someone to going back to being a friend.
| korovan chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Nice... I guess you were a bit nervous for this first boy-love outing (it shows) but I'm sure practice will make perfect. How about trying your hand at yuri?