Reviews for He's All Mine
honeycrispregal chapter 4 . 12/11/2012
its ok. tips though, this should be rated k or maybe T, also finish your stories.
CrimsonKitsune333 chapter 2 . 8/26/2010
this has the potential to be a really cool story, but you lost me with the horrbly short chapters, and the bold and italic type, which is very annoying to read. fix it up, and you might see more readers and reveiwers!