|Reviews for Brother|
| Keep going chapter 11 . 4/26
Just wanted to let you know I'm reading this in 2015 & your last update was in 2013. This is a beautifully written piece of work & I would love for you to continue. Your writing, grammar & spelling is perfect & the plot is truly believable & well thought out. As a avid reader of Naruto fanfiction I commend you on your work.
| The Flaming Darkness chapter 11 . 4/25
so sad *crying anime tears* can you please update
| jupimako chapter 11 . 4/5
Angst is fine... Good even. Especially since this story is awesome. But leaving us hanging in the middle of AngstVille isn't. Please please update.
| Psychothic Kitty chapter 11 . 4/3
I'm very much prepared to BEG here... please, PLEASE don't let this perfectly good, fun, well-written fiction work die! PLEASE COME BACK! T_T
| Morlana chapter 9 . 3/13
Just found your story, I really like it and hope you continue
| Elaine du Lac chapter 2 . 3/8
Well, it's pretty good for a first-ever fanfic! Intelligently written and well-thought, and well-imagined. Good dialogue, good prose and narration. I like your chapter titles too.
| JustAAvidReader chapter 11 . 2/18
you meanie, all the tears because of the last two chapters! (but so beautifully written).
i really like what youre doing here. its beautifull. i really hope you find it in you to continue it someday. beautifull.
| JustAAvidReader chapter 5 . 2/18
hi! i intend on comment on the future chapters later, but let me comment on your questinon in chapter 5.
I dont really have much contact with kids, but they do seem very kid like (normally the fics with them as kids portray's them fairly grown up for 8-10 years old kids...
I did think sasuke was trying to do something like this, leeching on naruto to not be on the limelight. it does come out as it, but not in a grownup way, but what feels like a kid might do, so thimbs up!
And im liking the pace :))
after i read other chapters, more reviews may come :)
| TheawesomeSaze chapter 11 . 2/14
This chapter was... emotional.
| Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 11 . 2/1
So. Many. TEARS! Those poor boys! This chapter made me cry - a lot. Still, the chapter was so beautiful in it's own way. You are truly an amazing artist. Please continue writing when you have the chance, you have so much talent. :)
| Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 10 . 2/1
OH MY GOSH! Squirrel! I cried so much for her! What an amazing ANBU she was! R.I.P. ANBU Squirrel!
| Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 8 . 2/1
Awww! They are just TOO CUTE! Honestly, I'm so happy with them being together! I just can't wait to see how far this story develops!
| Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 7 . 2/1
Another great chapter! I enjoyed it thoroughly! Congratulations and good luck on the move! :)
| Naru'sgirl1032 chapter 5 . 2/1
I absolutely adore your story idea! I think that the way you're portraying the characters, and their growth, are fairly accurate and I'm so glad Naruto and Sasuke will have SOMEONE other than themselves throughout their childhood!
| menonlyme chapter 11 . 1/14
will u be updating this story ?