Reviews for Brother
Brenden chapter 11 . 12/20/2015
goodwork
13animaluver chapter 11 . 12/14/2015
IM IN TEARS
SHIT
FUCK
CANNOT STOP
noMuku chapter 11 . 11/11/2015
The feels... Too sad.
Pls update
Guest chapter 11 . 10/30/2015
Please update this your writing is beautiful and very in character.
OfMoonsAndStars chapter 11 . 10/26/2015
Oh my god...my heart. It breaks for the poor baby Naruto and Sasuke.

This is brilliant writing. I really hope this story has not been abandoned as it's been two years since it's been updated! Let us know please?

Cheers!
Thorn D. Cinni chapter 10 . 10/16/2015
...no...more...ramen...? *sniff*
fearwill chapter 2 . 10/8/2015
Oh-ho! I really like where this is going and how you represent each member. Nice!
Blitza chapter 11 . 9/30/2015
Oh, poor Naruto
slstmaraudersjple chapter 11 . 9/16/2015
Dude... major kudos to you. I just discovered this fic and it is freaking AMAZING.

...it would be so awesome if the boys planted some weeds or something as a way for Naruto to honor Squirrel. (And I am SO sad that she only appeared in a couple chapters, but I am also glad that the boys can now relate to each other a little better.)

And poor Sakura. I wonder what you have in store for her...
Anonymous chapter 11 . 9/15/2015
Oh god...

I just kept waiting for you to say Tsukushi survived, and it just never came.

Meanwhile, Iruka is lobbing more kids at this unstable maelstrom, and Kakashi is watching, wallowing upon his own brokenness, and everyone is trying to do something without doing much of anything and oh god...

What I'm trying to say is that this is heart rending, and I want more of this story, just to know that everything is OK, even though I know it never will be again. Write more, damn you. WRITE! I must know what happens next. I need to see Naruto piecing himself together as Sasuke desperately struggles to stay intact. I...

I don't know what to do.

I don't think any of them knows what to do, either.

Well, that got off topic, didn't it? Your story is well crafted, and deftly tugs on the heartstrings. I just wonder how Sasuke got away without Squirrel noticing. That seems like a plot hole that needs some explanation, unless Sasuke is a whole lot sneakier than has been previously mentioned (or he's learning as much from Naruto as Naruto is from him, which is remarkably plausible).
Guest chapter 11 . 9/12/2015
Oh god. Ooohoohhhh this i oh my gOD. please. Please just. I know that your life is hectic and stressful and to have a shit ton of responsibilities but. Don't forget about this story. Please, please, even if it takes you another ten years to update it, don't forget about it.
NigerianGeek chapter 5 . 8/25/2015
No no no no no. Everything about this story is really very good. Very enjoyable. I've been reading fanfiction since I was 14, trust me it's good. The fact that it's not complete pains my very soul (and I don't even know if you still write fanfiction...) but alas, I shall have to cope.
Airka Yumeko chapter 11 . 7/14/2015
Man I love this story.
Wind Strengthens Fire chapter 11 . 7/8/2015
This is so glorious I'm so upset you didn't continue. Why? Naruto's asking why and so am I.
Gerbilfriend chapter 11 . 7/8/2015
I kinda like the extra angst it feels like it works . I hope that you are still going to update this.
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