Reviews for Brother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() And Sakura enters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just discovered this fic and read it through in one sitting. Really hope you haven't abandoned it, as it is both original and well written. Hinata's and Kakashi's entrances into the group looked to be of interesting potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so beautiful. It's like a huge thing rising out of the deep, like, how you see their friendship coming together, and, soon, it'll be so huge it'll overcome anything. I love the last moment between Sasuke and Naruto when Sasuke's trying to shake some sense into his friend. I hope that gets sorted out. :( I love it, though. XD |
![]() ![]() Hi, Just wanted to let you know I'm reading this in 2015 & your last update was in 2013. This is a beautifully written piece of work & I would love for you to continue. Your writing, grammar & spelling is perfect & the plot is truly believable & well thought out. As a avid reader of Naruto fanfiction I commend you on your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so sad *crying anime tears* can you please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Angst is fine... Good even. Especially since this story is awesome. But leaving us hanging in the middle of AngstVille isn't. Please please update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm very much prepared to BEG here... please, PLEASE don't let this perfectly good, fun, well-written fiction work die! PLEASE COME BACK! T_T |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found your story, I really like it and hope you continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it's pretty good for a first-ever fanfic! Intelligently written and well-thought, and well-imagined. Good dialogue, good prose and narration. I like your chapter titles too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you meanie, all the tears because of the last two chapters! (but so beautifully written). i really like what youre doing here. its beautifull. i really hope you find it in you to continue it someday. beautifull. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi! i intend on comment on the future chapters later, but let me comment on your questinon in chapter 5. I dont really have much contact with kids, but they do seem very kid like (normally the fics with them as kids portray's them fairly grown up for 8-10 years old kids... I did think sasuke was trying to do something like this, leeching on naruto to not be on the limelight. it does come out as it, but not in a grownup way, but what feels like a kid might do, so thimbs up! And im liking the pace :)) after i read other chapters, more reviews may come :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was... emotional. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So. Many. TEARS! Those poor boys! This chapter made me cry - a lot. Still, the chapter was so beautiful in it's own way. You are truly an amazing artist. Please continue writing when you have the chance, you have so much talent. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH! Squirrel! I cried so much for her! What an amazing ANBU she was! R.I.P. ANBU Squirrel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! They are just TOO CUTE! Honestly, I'm so happy with them being together! I just can't wait to see how far this story develops! |