Reviews for Brother
GooLord chapter 7 . 10/7/2017
Uuugh sakura? Maaaaaan I'd completely forgotten about her. Aw well. Who knows, maybe this turns out to be one of those select few fanfics where Sakura turns out to be an actual quality character!
GooLord chapter 5 . 10/7/2017
If you really want my advice I'd say your going just a tad bit fast but other than that you doing awesome! Really love the story! Now I'm gonna go read the next chapter :3
GooLord chapter 1 . 10/6/2017
Hehehe
Sleeping Dragon2333 chapter 11 . 8/20/2017
You know, I walked right into that. Yeah, I did. Eight-thirty at night and crying out my eyes. Poor Naruto. First I loved the couple of chapters, younger version of team seven helping out. But now this, oh man, poor Naruto. I hope he gets well soon and I hope you will update sometime in this life time. I mean, Naruto a mess and Sasuke was already a mess, and he can barely keep it up now, because the sunshine child is falling apart. Love it, I do hope you update though - whenever you can.
Netscape chapter 11 . 8/19/2017
This is probably one of the best friendship fics that I've come across in quite awhile. I just want to let you know people are still finding and enjoying the time, effort and work put into your story-and of course, I hope you keep on writing for random readers pleasure.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/10/2017
FIX THIS. NOW. Or I swear to all Angst Gods, I will hunt you down and pour fluff down your throat until you shit rainbows. Naruto was suppost to be Sasuke's balance, help him heal. Stop with the heartstrings, please!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/9/2017
...when ninjas go through trauma, they do one of two things.

one, they amass a collection of smaller ninjas that remind them of themselves.

two, they isolate themselves completely and don't talk to anyone ever again.

look me in the eyes and tell me it's not true. look at canon, at everyone in canon and tell me it's not true.

sasuke took the second path in canon, here he's taking the first
Kyogre chapter 11 . 7/7/2017
I know this is super old, but it is also super amazing, thank you! I love the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto (Sasuke is a jerk, but he cares a lot! both at the same time!) and the way you bring in Sakura and Hinata. And also Iruka and Kakashi and Sandaime. Really great story.
Laryna6 chapter 11 . 6/27/2017
And now Hinata! A very good fic - cute, but more than just cute even though you could have coasted on that. I like the various things you're addressing.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/26/2017
If you are still alive & read this, PLEASE COME BACK TO THIS STORY!
Guest chapter 11 . 6/10/2017
Gosh this is good. You're not discontinuing this right? So please, update. Maybe sooner if you can. Tsukushi shouldn't be dead, she's too good to die! She should've stayed alive and watch Naruto like she used to do. Oh my god. I just want to bawl my eyes. And there Sasuke goes, saying that he watched his clan slaughtered. Ton of tears. Updateeee please
Pecha Pichu chapter 1 . 6/9/2017
hey there, just came back from your bio :) Just wanted to express thanks for creating and even publishing your amazing stories to the Naruto fanfic fandom! I understand how busy you are, so am even more grateful that you would take time out of a hectic life to selflessly create stories that readers like me, love-reading-but-cannot-write-to-save-our-lives can enjoy!

For "Brother": This is so so cute, loving minis-Sasuke, Naruto and Sakura (she may even be the cutest, for being her shy, pre-genin self). Still lol'ing at the first chapter's title hahaha. It was truly enjoyable to read, and a very legitimate what-if?
kyuzi4869 chapter 11 . 5/5/2017
Please, Continue this story, it has been a while since the last update
Guest chapter 11 . 5/4/2017
waaaaaaaaaaa. and it's the last chapter. waaaaaaaaa.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/4/2017
Narutos patented therapy worked even before he even started talking directly to people. heh.
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