I really like how you incorporated this story to begin after Sasuke's profound lake dive - because really, we have no idea how he comes up again from that depth. XD

And the story itself has a really promising and probable plot. After I began reading I couldn't help thinking "Now why the hell didn't that REALLY happen!"

I can't wait to read about Naruto and Sasuke's child interaction!

Cool, I really like the chapter. Especially how mature Naruto is about nightmares and the rooms, everything in general. Though he still has that abrupt yelling and excitement. Very cool.

I'm just curious sense Naruto's taking care of Sasuke, if Sasuke in turn will have to take care of Naruto?

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapt. I hope you continue it and some reviews come. The whole 'brother' thing doesn't come around too often.

Great story. _ You really got the characters to just jump off the page. :D

Cute

cool their budding friendship is funny. well dont give up this fic even if you dont get 10 reviews its way to good to give up. update plz.

cont plz love the way its going.

i liked the chapter. it gave a lot of nice the kiba part very funny.

love the last start to the fic. cant wait to read more.

:) Yes! My review button is finally working! Ahem.

Firstly, I adore this story. The plot line sticks to how the manga is going (the two brothers theme), instead of going in a yaoi direction.

Naruto is so happy as well. Since he is a positive, and rude, person it is nice to see him being loud and proud.

When you say 'no pairings', does that include Sasuke and Naruto with other characters? Cause I enjoy this story more if there were no pairings whatsoever.

I love this story! The characterization is superb! I would seriously love to see how to boys continue to get on, and also how they shop together... it's the little things that don't matter truly that interest me.

I like that Sasuke forgot about food and burned dinner, as he is still a child. You portray them very well, and I hope you get your reviews!

I would love to read more of this~

Awesome job !

I can't wait for the next chapter.

it was alright... but given the right situation this could make an older Naruto really resent Konoha. they left him alone for that long never lifting a hand to help him or at least assign him a caretaker. then as soon as something went wrong for Sasuke he is used as the boys comfort tool...this has potential for a bad fallout

Yay a new chapter, I'm so happy.

It's good showing something from both Naruto's and Sasuke's perspectives.

Cant wait for the next chapter.

Fickle17 out.

loven it so far. Keep it up.

"whoops...!" Is the only thing that popped in my mind at the very last sentence! What a great way for them to be introduced! Great job! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Great chapter!

-Ray