Reviews for One More One Last Kiss
Lady Of Order And Chaos 1995 chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
I hope your grandma got better
This story is really good :)
Made me feel like crying and I read it three times before sending this sad and excelent
andysanime chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Really good job on this one-shot ). I hope your grandma turned out to be ok.
animedprincess chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
I love your title and this was a truly wonderful story. I really, really liked it and I kinda ended up crying towards the end myself. :) keep up the good work!
Phoenix0192 chapter 1 . 7/7/2011

Excellent job on this fic, you built your characters beautifully and skillflly. I liked the evolution that this story followed, it really rang true and was nice to see the realism behind the actions and reactions - not an easy feat.

The only point of contention that I would raise was that this seemed to be very disjointed and it was not always clear whose perspective it was taken from. A minor point but it is always the little things that can change a story.

Excellent job.

Keep up the good work

- Phoenix
MelancholyHappiness chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
It's me, HailMyApathy~ I miss you, dearest!

But this story was fantastic! You're so good at angst!
looptheloopy chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
That was beautiful. Ah I wish it went one for ever! Great story ;)
Cheshire Stripe chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
This was a really cute and sad story and I loved it! -
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
So very sad. It's too bad Yuugi had to get injured badly before Yami realised what he was doing to him. I 'm glad he relented and let them be together.
DarknekoKurai chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Omg I love it! It was sad but it was good!