|Reviews for Alice in Underland: The Return|
| Bookworm girl chapter 25 . 10/12/2013
Hi! I really liked your story, it's fantastic. However, I was wondering if you would post a T-rated version?
| Guest chapter 62 . 9/15/2013
This is amazing no matter what others say, thank for putting in so many details. I LOVE when writers do that.
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/10/2013
I know that many reader give you grief about the pacing of the story and relationship, but I think it's brilliant. Having been a fan-fic reader for about a decade now, I greatly appreciate the maturity of your writing style and story progression. Writers such as yourself are a rarity on this website, and I feel very fortunate to have come across you. :)
| Queen of Dorks chapter 65 . 9/23/2012
I absolutly LOVE, LOVE, LOVED IT! This is the perfect story that I've been looking for! I've already read Alice in Underland: The Letters, and you wouldn't believe how many people I told about it! I am a HUGE Alice in Wonderland fan and have been looking for a fanfic that's not too graphic and, Vióla! Here you are with not one, but TWO stories/novels, right here, waiting to be read! I was sooo happy! And I LOVE your writing style! It's just right! Not too fast or too slow, perfect pacing and wonderful timing with the little surprises of yours! I can honestly say that I'm waiting (not-so-patiently) for your next book/story Alice in Underland: The Gaurdian Trio! (I don't have the other page open right now so I can't quite get the title right, so sorry!) You have a lovely way of writing and I don't care what other people say or said about it being 'too slow'! You are a GREAT writer and I admire you greatly for standing up for the way you write because NO ONE can take away your right to write what you want(since you do it responsibly)! Thank you again for posting this wonderfully adventurous story that I don't doubt I will be reading again soon!
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| The Liesmith chapter 65 . 2/17/2012
Simply amazing and beautifully written. Kudos to you my dear, for weaving a brilliant romance. Im a hopeless romantic myself, a dreamer, and i loved this fiction.
| Ewbie Moons chapter 66 . 1/7/2012
So it's over. I'm sad, because it's over, but also glad, because that means you can work more on The Letters and Trio of Guardians. This was (for lack of better words, sadly) a truly astounding, amazing, great, magnificent, fantastic, epic, wonderful and awesome story. I enjoyed every second of it. :)
| Snickerdoodle Black chapter 63 . 1/7/2012
Awww! I loved it!
I just wanted to respond to your... Author's Rant... last chapter. I totally understand you're trying to keep it true to the time and honestly, I greatly respect you for it. I'm young, and so my opinion is probably not as highly valued as the "more intelligent reviewers" but I do support you and honestly, I think it would be a little weird if you stressed how gentlemanly and polite Tarrant was and then they suddenly had sex. Only three more chapters and then I'll start begging for Book Three or more Book One.
| Snickerdoodle Black chapter 61 . 1/7/2012
I just wanted to say you made your first two typos in this whole story in this one chapter.
1. Absolem says "Close you eyes, Tarrant." It should be 'your.'
2. Mrs. Kingsleigh (though I know you spell it Kingsley) "gased at Alice." The word is actually spelled 'gazed' though I know it could be confusing to spell 'apologised' and 'gazed' differently.
| Snickerdoodle Black chapter 60 . 1/7/2012
The site won't let me log in for some reason. :(
Sigh. I'm so close to the end! You must finish Book 1 ASAP and start on Book 3!
I'm glad Tarrant and Stayne got their little conversation over with... Will Stayne and Elsie be invited to the wedding?
| Ewbie Moons chapter 57 . 1/7/2012
So I suppose Stayne/Elsie is also a good idea. I didn't think about it til they got interested in each other, but it's kinda cool.
I can't wait til Alice and Tarrant are married, but I'm sad because there's only nine more chapters for me to read. Oh well...
You're an astounding writer!
| Ewbie Moons chapter 54 . 1/7/2012
You know, I kind of like Stayne (or Ilosovic, I suppose, but Stayne is shorter) now that he's all nice... And I was thinking Cora might be good for him, because I'm weird like that... I hope next chapter we get to see what Tarrant says to Mally.
| Ewbie Moons chapter 51 . 1/7/2012
Holy chicken McNugget! Well, this is an interesting development...
Stayne can't just kidnap her now! Things were getting good! (Well Chrissy this is what you get for wishing for more Stayne action...)
| Snickerdoodle Black chapter 48 . 1/7/2012
Sigh... those two just can't keep their hands off each other!
I'm so glad they're betrothed, and the bushes scene has me worried (It's Stayne!) but excited (It's Stayne!).