|Reviews for Still Lingers Here|
| London Bai chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
This was amazing! The entire piece had a catching effect to it. I love how you put in the little arguement between Victor and Victoria about what they were going to name their son.
The part that really started the waterworks was when you said, "The house is quiet now. The only sound is the echoing sound of the piano keys tinkling. Sometimes I rush to the music room to hear him play, but then I remember he isn't here. But the one who is the most devastated is our own little angel sent from Heaven. JJ doesn't understand why Daddy went away and so suddenly."
You have a really good talent for words. :D
| coraline5555 chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
wow great story i LOVE the ending it was so touching great job!
| Contradiction King chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
That was very sweet and touching! It's so sad that Victor knew he was dying and used his last words to tell Victoria how much he loved her. Very well written, keep up the good work!
| GreenWallsOfArt chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
I'll be honest, the argument between Victor and Victoria made me laugh a lot- and their relationship seem a whole lot more real. The ending was beautiful too, wonderfully written.