|Reviews for Chapter 18: The Wedding|
| Vanessa Vora chapter 1 . 5/1
This was amazing, not perfect, but close to it, I think that Lois Lowry would love this idea for a 18th chapter, thank you so much for making this!
| The Ice Within chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
it's quite okay.
| FFww2reviewerJC chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Good, but work on paragraphs? It's hard to read.
Do something like this: (just made this up)
"Hey!" Annemarie laughed. "What's up?"
"Nothing much," Mama said.
Kristi laughed. "Hello Annemarie"