Reviews for Chapter 18: The Wedding
The Ice Within chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
it's quite okay.

good job.

-icy-
FFww2reviewerJC chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Good, but work on paragraphs? It's hard to read.

Do something like this: (just made this up)

"Hey!" Annemarie laughed. "What's up?"

"Nothing much," Mama said.

Kristi laughed. "Hello Annemarie"