Reviews for A Fool's Burden
MagicallyMalicious chapter 3 . 6/2/2011
Drunk!James Storm rules! I also really loved Lex's reaction to Chris busting his self out...PRICELESS!
MagicallyMalicious chapter 2 . 6/2/2011
Yay! chrissy is out of the closet! I knew Alex would understand! Poor A.J., why the fuck would he think that church was a place to go help with this particular problem? Silly boy. I'm on to the next chapter!
MagicallyMalicious chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I never even thought I would want to read Sabin/Styles let alone love it! Again I am prompted to tell you that you are amazing. I wish I could get my excitement under enough control to write all the things it love about this chapter but I can't, so I'll just say that it's awesome and I'm on to the next!
Rkox chapter 6 . 3/16/2011
i honestly think this stroy could end there.

i dont want it too, but it feels finished.

there doesnt need to be an answer.

i loved this story :)
Rkox chapter 4 . 3/16/2011
just wow.

theyre situation is just so sad.

part of me wants them to get back together.

part of me just knows, even if aj dumped taylor & came out as gay, even if they got together.

It wouldnt be right. they're never gonna be the same again.

its utterly heart breaking.

i LOVE it. (: 3
Rkox chapter 3 . 3/16/2011
j'adore3.

honestly i love this story so much you don't even understand (: 3
Rkox chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
I honestly can not get enough of this story.

your writting is fantastic, it keeps me hanging off each word.

thank you :) x
Rkox chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
i love, how right for each other they are, but they just keep breaking each other apart piece by piece. Honestly its amazing. i love this story so much 3
RosietheMoogle chapter 6 . 2/1/2011
Umm... Is there more of this? Cause I need it like BURNING. I swear, before this fic I was all for AJ/Daniels (or Joe/AJ/Daniels) my one true TNA OTP (and ok, MCMG)- and then *you* come along and suddenly BAM Chris/AJ knocked any other pairing out the water.

I think it's the fact that Chris wants so badly for AJ to dance to Cherry Pie for him- WHICH I ALSO WANT LIKE BURNING, EVEN IF IT'S CRACK BURNING. I hope you know I went straight to my iPod and put Warrant on repeat :P.

And the more serious aspects, of course- Chris being so head over heels for AJ, AJ being so head over heels for Chris but fighting with his upbringing and all (loved that it wasn't one of your "generic" they're gay and everyone's fine with it fics. There were *depths* and *layers* to it that made it more real and all the more personal for it.

So, yes, I'm a little in love with you and I hope to see more Chris/AJ from you, because it rocks my socks (Also- do you know of more TNA slash fics around? I've been in a craving for some, but unfor it doesn't to be as popular as WWE slash).
BellaHickenbottom chapter 6 . 9/26/2010
C'mon AJ, you know you are secretly wishing you and Chris can be together again so just take a deep breath and jump in! Theres my advice for the day LOL
NeroAnne chapter 6 . 9/21/2010
0_0!

BRILLIANT ending.

I think it's awesome that you didn't make them end up together. It leaves more to the imagination that way! But wow, that ending...so damn good.

I was so into it, -_- I actually got a bit mad when it ended!

Poor dudes, but they'll be alright.

Loved it!
slashburd chapter 6 . 9/21/2010
Firstly I just want to say that as I went to read this Feels Like Heaven by Fiction Factory (retro 80's pop ftw) was the top of my itunes DJ list. Check the lyrics. Apple. It watchez uz more than Vince does!

Anyway, this is kinda like a concert where they've not played the one song you hoped you'd hear and then they whip it out as the encore and you go home remembering it as a great night. Until the next day when you think about what came before the song you really wanted. The story is so true to life, so probably and tangible that it makes it almost difficult to read. Reality in 'struggle' stories is so much win, there's no sense of 'do it and be damned' at the outset here which I think adds so much depth to the story.

The way you write them all is awesome as ever but I have a particular attachment to Shelley. He is so on the money in every word and gesture. You know I'm enjoying the read of this fic and I can't help but wonder if its nearing the end or if it even has an end yet. Anyways, another great chapter, definitely the right thing to do to split it up, the flow of the two is there but its been like taking a deep breath and getting steeled to read the second part. I love it all, I really do.
redsandman99 chapter 6 . 9/20/2010
Dang. That was a very good ending. I'll admit that I did want to see them end up together but I'm taking comfort in the fact that it seems like a possibility once AJ comes to terms with himself.
redsandman99 chapter 5 . 9/20/2010
I do feel bad that Taylor ended up getting hurt because of this but honestly, breaking up with her was the only thing AJ could really do. He can't lie to himself about what he really wants and it's not fair to lie to her and lead her along into thinking he's completely in love with her.
AlyssaKendall chapter 5 . 9/19/2010
Diggin' it, as always. A little concerned for Sabin's character in this though. If you have to ponder alcoholism, usually, you're already on your way. Or... you're trying really hard to avoid it... but he's still drinking. Regularly. So, that's my only area of concern.

You pretty much captured a break up, perfectly. Been, there, done that on Taylor's side. And it's not okay, and it's not fun. Even though Shelley's little comments were silly. And speaking of him, the conversations with him? I love them. Which is funny because I dislike him so much IRL. Here though? I dig. I dig it well.

I also loved the friendship interaction between AJ and FACD. Not something we see a lot of, at least not me or you, heh. We're always so busy slashing them and him and everything that the friendship has. That was amazing. I actually wanted to see Chris (Daniels) just kind of staying close to AJ, keeping an eye on him. I don't know why, but I'm under the impression that AJ often needs looked over. He seems to have issues when he's alone. Y'know... or threatens to break stuff. Even just him with Lethal keeps me more at ease than when AJ is alone.

I was going somewhere with this, but now I'm distracted by talking to you via twitter about Santino and Koz, and I have stuff I wanna write myself, so, yes. I sense the finale is near. Looking forward to it :)
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