Reviews for The Consequences of a Lie
Korog the Oversoul chapter 1 . 10/13
I have to say that I don't think I've ever come across a fanfic that has a good Mikazuki. I'm kinda hoping that Kushina comes back and not only kicks Jiraiya's but Hiruzen's rears. I'm also kind of hoping that Naruto and Kushina fall for each other, and Kushina is part of the harem.
AsashiOfTheDarkFist chapter 3 . 10/5
Enough of the Kishimoto garbage jackass.
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 7/21
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 7/21
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 7/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 7/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 7/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
Dragoncyber22 chapter 9 . 6/2
continues the story
Krieg118 chapter 9 . 5/29
This is a damn good story. Hope you continue it. Only issues I had with it were the lack of line breaks and how Naruto became a little too wordy with Konohamaru. Naruto's 12 years old and a troublemaker. He's definitely not going to speak properly.
my 2 guys chapter 9 . 11/22/2015
that was good keep the chapters coming
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 8 . 8/2/2015
UPDATE
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
Proper grammar? Check;
Compelling first chapter? Double check;
Uses paragraphs, periods and commas? Check!
Mantains the naming style from the manga, saying first the surname and then the first name? Check check check!
A chapter 9 . 6/27/2015
When?
imnotraven16 chapter 9 . 5/20/2015
excellent start
helrio uzugaku chapter 9 . 4/20/2015
Haha, pretty good. Can't wait for when Naruto meets Jiraiya, that'll be a good firework show. I can see kushina walking through the gates raising hell over how Naruto was treated, it's gonna be hilarious.
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