|Reviews for Rachel Barnsworth McGee|
| alix33 chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
"Tim's parent's are dead," - "Tim's parents are dead,".
"The first time Tim introduced us, he dragged me into the elevator pulled the emergency stop switch and told me that if I ever hurt Tim, kill me and make it look like an accident. He was serious, and he probably would have, but I told him that would never hurt Tim, that I loved him. He stared at me and I swear he saw right into my soul, before he smiled and hit the switch again to send us back to the bullpen. I was terrified." - AW at Papa Bear Gibbs going all growly and protective over his Tim-cub!
"He wasn't the only one to threaten me the day Tim introduced me to his team. Abby said she would kill me without leaving any forensic evidence. Tony said he would rip my limbs off them run me over with his Mustang. Ziva said she'd torture me to death slowly with a paperclip. Jimmy said he'd perform my autopsy while I was still alive." - Yay!
| starjems88 chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
| RedDragen chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Another wonderful start, I would love to see what you do next
| scottiedog chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Excellent! You captured your OC and the team very well. Good Job!
| whatweareafreaidof chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Cool good story