|Reviews for Harry Potter McGonagall|
| missgsmith51 chapter 9 . 1/27
Very nice story! I thought you did a nice job of presenting a plausible alternative to Jo's plot lines.
I think you did an especially good job with the final battle. There seemed to be fewer DEs than would have been involved in a last stand at the Castle. Besides, Voldy is a bully and a coward, so attacking train full of children that probably had concealed student DEs fits his modus operandi perfectly.
I liked your wedding scenes, as well. I appreciate that you did not get bogged down with excesses here, as many are wont do. A true fan of small, intimate weddings that focus on the couple and the business at hand - as opposed to excessive pomp, pageantry, and finery that costs a mint and is never worn again, unless by a daughter or granddaughter - I was pleased to see that H&H and their vows took center stage over dresses and decor.
| missgsmith51 chapter 8 . 1/27
"Showing their usual promptness, the aurors arrived moments after the battle ended." ROTFLOL! That is perfect!
It looks like Brianna finally got a picture of what it has been like to be Harry since he entered the Wonderful World of Wizards.
| missgsmith51 chapter 7 . 1/27
Aww, Remus and Charity? She's nice enough, but I like him with Tonks. Oh, well ..
I hope Hermione calls Minerva on her mirror and gets help!
| missgsmith51 chapter 6 . 1/27
R.I.P. Dumbledore. So ... all of the inanimate Horcruxes have been destroyed. Only Nagini remains, and when she is killed, Riddle can finally be vanquished. I hope they get on with it and no one else dies in the process.
| missgsmith51 chapter 5 . 1/27
Yeay! Sirius and Remus are freeeee! They can come back and help Harry defeat Voldy! (I also have a bad feeling that they will take Brianna on as an apprentice.)
I have no problem with the summary of the trial. If I decide I want to spend many pages on the trial, I'm sure I can find several stories with long, drawn out versions of it. ;) Unless something really extraordinary happens - like the Wizengamut demands that Lucius be questioned under Veritaserum or Amelia requires all members to present their bared left forearms for inspection - I don't need all of the minute details.
| missgsmith51 chapter 4 . 1/27
ROTFLOL at Voldy singing "I'm a Little Teapot"!
Yeay! Five Horcruxes down - the Diary, the Ring, the Locket, the Diadem, and Harry's piece - and two to go - the Cup and Nagini. Once those are done, shouldn't anyone be able to AK him?
So, the Pink Toad wants to be the one who takes down a Fudge, eh? Interesting!
| missgsmith51 chapter 3 . 1/27
Finally Brianna has done something to help Harry. It was fairly easy for her to convince Ginny that she really wasn't in love with Harry. Brianna was able to point out that Ginny had known Harry for three years, but her infatuation had not started until she knew Harry's last name was Potter. Kind of a dead giveaway ...
I appreciated Harry telling his dorm mates what he did NOT want to talk about concerning the women they dated. Consequently, they are probably some of the only gentlemen in Hogwarts; I'm sure poor Neville is forced to put up with the crude junk Ron and Seamus spew. I imagine Cedric keeps the 'Puffs' chatter polite, but I'd hate to hear the Slytherin trash talk ... although it might be better without Snape there to let it flow unchecked.
Finally, Harry seems to have set the boundaries for "Albus Time" to be all business and no time wasting, making every minute count.
| missgsmith51 chapter 2 . 1/27
Yeay! You managed to get rid of the Pink Toad in one day! You're my hero! (Please say she stays gone!) I loath that woman almost as much as Bella and Voldy. I would check her left forearm, just in case. She is absolutely vile.
| missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 1/27
Okay, the blood quill has been introduced, and we have been informed of its only legal use. With Umbridge at Hogwarts, I'd say that means a year if misery for Harry. If I were him, I'd transfer to either Beauxbatons or the American school at the first sign of trouble with that old toad.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/13
Thank you so much for not pairing Remus with Tonks. I know it's meant to be so sweet and everyone is supposed to love them but frankly I find their relationship disgusting. Tonks attended Hogwarts for Harry's first year or with Charlie Weasley, either way Remus is WAY to old for her and I absolutely hate it when they're paired together
| DP chapter 9 . 12/31/2013
After reading this whole series, I'm thoroughly impressed with the author's writing skills, narrative abilities, and general aptitude towards this. Well done and thank you.
| Harry Potter Fan chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
You have Dumbledore's initials wrong. It's Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore, not Albus Wulfric Percival Brian Dumbledore.
| Hermione Potter 2014 chapter 9 . 12/13/2013
This is amazing! I love pair HARRY/HERMIONE
,this is my faforite Pie-FOREVER!
| Pauline Hargrave chapter 9 . 11/28/2013
Thanks for your books I have really enjoyed the read. Couldn't put it down and used it as a reward once I'd done certain jobs
| Deathday Party Planner chapter 9 . 11/15/2013
Wonderful! Thank you for such a terrific reading experience! For some reason I put off reading this story, though I have read other of your works, I wish I hadn't waited. I came to fanfiction as a sort of pre-screener for my young daughters who had discovered this avenue to continue the fun after finishing the JKR series. Since then I have become an avid reader of the many great talents to be found writing Harry Potter fanfiction, not least among them yourself. However, I still take my Mom's role as pre-screener very seriously. And in that role, I can't pay an author a greater compliment than to give one of their stories to my girls to enjoy. Without reservation, I have put both HM and HPM in their access file to enjoy as I'm sure they will. Again, thank you!