Reviews for I Hold You in My Arms
Lunar-Shadow-of-The-Nosferatu chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Okay, I am in awe of how wonderful you write. The way you capture emotions, interactions, character thoughts, and you capture the attention of the reader. We want to read more of your beautiful work! D

I don't think I've seen a better narration from Jin's point of view by an author during my years here. And I've been around on for a long time now. You express his thoughts, and emotions so well. Perfectly, even. I adore your Jin, and I can't help but feel very sorry for him at how everything turns out.

Let me see, first thing first, I was drawn in by your wonderful writing. It's so beautifully laid out. Your writing is so wonderfully done. The way you use your words. Comparing your writing to mine, yours is much more easier to feel the emotion behind.

My favourite line, and the one which actually caused my eyes to water, "I see the light in your eyes, and I know am doing the right thing by making you believe you did, too."

It really stuck out to me, and this is one of the one beautiful pieces of fanfiction I've read here D

You have a real talent for writing, you know, and I hope to read more D
MissTaken chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Another beautiful fic as expected. You gave such a good view of their relationship and Jin's emotions.
vdaymassacre chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
It's a one-shot, but it has a lot to offer. Nice work. :)
Rojo-Conquistador chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
I can't say anything else but... bloody hell. It's so brilliant. The way you write with such life like ambiance makes me want to look forward to more of your stories.
HenrySeb chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
That was a beautiful story . . . sad but that is what makes it what it is. Excellent job.
Lil' Miss Spookiness chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
"I hold you in my arms, and you are dying."

i knew that was coming!

for some strange reason the very last line made me laugh

i blame it on this evil virus making me all sick!

groovy fic (in a sad death coated way..) (m death-coated)

sorry im a bit weird today (well weirder than usual)

love ur jinXhwoarang fics
Razer Athane chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
'Then, by accident, your eyes hold mine, and I realize: we are the same. You realize it, too, visibly startled, and the seeds of our discord are laid that moment.'

'I was the son of fate, but I am not the one fighting him.'

'As we fall, I still wonder if I should have checked your pulse, as you lost consciousness.'

My three favourite lines. I've got homework to do and I can't do it because I'm just so inspired by what you've written here; those lines really made me stop every time. I just loved this. So much. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.
Divinely Ethereal chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Lovely fic! Reminds me of my last piece, "Reflections of Rivals". Except no Azazel. And no sex, either, haha. But seriously, the way you wrote the sex is so eloquent, it makes me doubt the merits of an M rating( in my mind I associate the M with cheap porn, not beautiful erotica such as this, but hey, what the hell do I know?)

"Your heart is mine, fiend." I'm totally Team Jin, lol.

"As we fall, I still wonder if I should have checked your pulse, as you lost consciousness." Damn awesome closing!

Happy Writing!
screamingwindchime chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
I love it. I love how you wrote it, I love everything about it. Brilliant. Wonderful. OMG. :)
HappyMe-O chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
This was beautiful. Sad but very beautiful and poetic. I loved it. The wording was great and easy to read. And There is nothing more to say but it was just beautiful. Amazing! Almost like Romeo and Juliet. I loved it!
Darial Goldscythe Kuznetsova chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
I'm freaking ready to build a shrine for your fics and sacrifice Marduk. *worship* Excuse, I go put Returner on and read this once more.
Vanessa Dragunova chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Oh, my goddess Salysha! *bows*

This was one of the best fics I've read of you: so tragic, emotive, and entirely inspiring.

I simply loved the spoiler! O_o... I'd vote for it to be the original plot.

I always prefer fics told by someone's poit of view, and you killed me through Jin's words. *adds to faves and dies*
A Road Unturning chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
A piece immersed in naked, human pain. The simple prose worked beautifully with the gashing subtext of a heart being ripped open. Poetic lexis and fleshed out, complex characterisation make for a compelling read, leaving me half dead with the poignance, the injustice, the love, of the first person narrative.

"As we fall, I still wonder if I should have checked your pulse, as you lost consciousness..."

An understated look into all consuming, unfairytale love.

Splendid work.

Red