Reviews for Naruto and the Quite one
Leto Okami chapter 2 . 11/17
again you lucky piece of shit wannabe ninja i hate you no i LOATHE your very existence damn idiot who the fuck would wear piece of shit orange.
Leto Okami chapter 1 . 11/17
...naruto...i hate lucky sonova bitch i wanna kill you you horrendous orange jumpsuit wearing freak of nature such a pitiful ninja wearing orange n wonder he was the dead last he doesn't even have a bloodline other than the uzumaki 's a disgrace of a ninja
uzuuchi007 chapter 2 . 10/30/2014
kenrick william chapter 2 . 10/22/2013
This story is very interesting but needs a few more chapters . Good try.
phelen.ward chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
you could always have one of his other fraction walk in and join sun-sun and naruto
Anonymous chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
Good story so far, hope you can continue it. Have you ever thought of making a harem version of this story (you know with all four girls sharing his love and ;) ) Plus not to insult you, but you could work on spelling a little bit in some part such as "tired" and "sure." (Don't let the good stories die!)
Zero Gawain chapter 2 . 2/26/2012
I liked the lemon. thanks
Mad-reaper748 chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
look i'm gonna be straight with you,this story could have been really good but you fumbled it with the should practice writing them before posting a story.I apologize if this sounds like a flame that wasn't my intention, my intention was just to give some constructive critisism.I enjoy rading your other story's keep it up. YOUR REVEIWER , HORCRUXXX
omally-dood chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
nice work i cant w8 2 see what happens next
Dudtheman chapter 2 . 5/13/2010
say what you will i enjoyed the read thanks )
GrayKitsune chapter 2 . 5/4/2010
Only other girl I like there other then his current fraccion is Nel.
snake1980 chapter 2 . 5/2/2010
great first 2 wait to see what happends in the next one. now for the harem pick i would add Neliel. capture some shinigamis like rangiku,soifon,matsumoto. if you are going to have any one from naruto past life come into the story i would say add temari,hana,anko,yugao could say they were his wifes in his past life before he was killed and they have a chose eather join him or die. thats my pick. update very soon
UMMX chapter 2 . 4/26/2010
Are you going to add Circucci Sanderwicci to the story. Also Menoly or Female Nurses to the story...

Also are you going to kill Nel?
UMMX chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
You should do Harribel story and Menoly story... I think that would work...
overelemental4 chapter 2 . 4/19/2010
Good chapter and I like how it is going to be a harem. I have a suggestion for someone being in it. Neliel would be a believable and good character to have. Also if it's not to much,could you have like a shinigami that they capture or something like Rangiku or Retsu.
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