Reviews for WorldWar: The Balance Destroyed |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Good update...finally. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh yeah! This made my week! Glad to see this story back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha William Rodgers! Let me guess, the co-pilot's name was Wilma? I won't spoil it for the others that missed it. So I hope you'll have exposition that explains what's happened in the last 7 years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there, so this is a new story continuing in this story thread? Sounds great! I love this story and always look forward to new chapters. I like that we were able to invite the priests to NY and show them our culture. I wonder what they will have to say about the rest of our world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am quite curious to read more of the adventures of these missionaries :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an interesting chapter... And I like how you kept the missionaries from being caricatures while still making sure it is obvious that they come from a very different culture. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good start to the second leg of this story. I thought you were going for a more Home Alone 2 feel with the concierge, until Manuel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved your reference to Faulty Towers... am really looking forward to more apo24 |
![]() ![]() ![]() As someone who lives a few blocks away from the Waldorf Astoria and has held events at the hotel, I must say, you've done a good job at conveying it's opulence. Have you ever been to the Waldorf before? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well you have me intrigued, and was beginning to wonder when the next of the stories was going to be released, seems that this answers that. Even though this is going to be serious, I still believe quite funny at times, with the whole culture shock of these religious people encountering a society where religion means almost nothing. And also for them to learn the errors of their people's ways, thinking that the people on earth are oppressed everywhere. Looking forward to more, what kind of update schedule are we looking at with this story? Is it like once every month, or every few months? |
![]() ![]() ![]() *snort* This is hilarious. :D And the Fawlty Towers shout-out was quite good, too. I would love to see how unsuccessful they are at bringing any converts to them. In fact, put one of them on a debate with someone from the Catholic Church or an atheist (PZ Myers, Richard Dawkins) and let's see how hard they get pwned. Also, I am still hoping that you will have a chapter where someone from the Colonies (The Ambassador, the President) watches Galaxy Quest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOOO! WW update! I've been looking forward to the missionaries' chapters, and this first part didn't disappoint. I've got a question though, if you don't mind? Why are they so amazed/surprised by the decor inside the hotel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is greta to see the next step on this great ficc. I already want t see their reaction when they see the news flash about the war against the Aliance, on special if they show space battle and dogs fight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh good Albert G is back and with the missionaries, this crew is in New york city and what a great place to be for religion. Heavy Catholic, protestant and muslim influences there. Perhaps with all their singing theyd enjoy some southern Baptist? I see lots of arguing in the future for this group. |