|Reviews for these words are better left unsaid|
| im not telling u chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
I dont understand...
| Silverpearl2 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
This was beautiful! Nearly teared up. Just wonderful...
| Queen of Sneaks chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Hi! It's me again! I finally got an account. I still love your story, and this is about the billionth time I read it. Keep up the amazing writing.
| Queen Of Sneaks chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
This is just...beautiful. It made me cry, and that is a hard thing to do. I can't express what I feel after reading this. It has given ne hope I have not felt before...My thoughts will not go down on this electic paper...They must be left unsaid.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
that is so sweet! i wish they could be together. nice job emilyforprez. i enjoyed reading it but the scene changes way to quickly without explaining what happened. is the story about sorreltail and jayfeather. you never mentioned their names you should work on that. to anybody who doesn't agree with me please tell me what i missed. otherwise hope u practice more and i enjoyed reading this. wait a sec this is cinderheart and jayfeather! is cinderheart the one who was cinderpelt? and cinderpelt was the old medicine cat before leafpool! strange pairing.
| Macey-the-Magical chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Whoa... I usually, like... really dislike JayxCinder, but this is incredible! It's so sad! '( *cry* Fantastic job!
| Storm that Twists in Spiral chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Awww! I loved it! Cinder/Jay is my favorite pairing, and this was so amazingly good.
| warriorcrazy chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Aw...CinderXJay ALL THE WAY! xD
| Blazingstar of ThunderClan chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Awwwww. CinderXJay is just so adorable.
| Cyrille Kiwi Lynn chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
It's just so beutiful... *cries* JayXCinder is my fav couple yet I heard they are bringing around a new couple, LionXCinder maybe? I've seen a few of those...*eye twitches* oh well, Jay-Jay will always have her!
Great story! This is going on my favs!
| Laughing Rain chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
I think this is probably the best pairing in the PoT arc. I really resent that the author is bringing about another Cinderheart pairing... I won't say it, in the case you haven't read the new book. Amazing, amazing story. Really. I adored this.
| CoolAwesomeRandomGirl123 chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
OMG SO SWEET! OH
| Kittifreak chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Oh, this is a gorgeous piece of writing. I'm faving for sure!
| Ivy Swish chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
that was so sad...but in a"good" way. :)
| cloudy eve chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Aw... that's so sweet _. I really like it...