This was a great story. Thank you
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Just re-read this story, still a good one. Thanks

This is definitely not what I expected when I read the summary lol. It was amazing!
I was on the edge of my metaphorical seat the whole time lol.
Thanks for sharing!

I’m so glad somebody recommended this in a Facebook group because it is a GEM! I will come back to reread and fall in love with these two again and again! I’m anxious to read the outtakes and more of your works! Happy writing!:)

I wish I had read this before the author passed, so I could tell her how amazing this story was. I danced around reading this fic for years, I knew it’d be fantastically written and I was not let down. I loved how everything weaved together in the end, I did not see any of it coming and love love loveedddd the ending!

I really enjoyed this fic. I certainly did not anticipate the sharp turn this fic took when I first began reading. Then, you managed to keep me guessing. Thank you for sharing your story.

I expected one half of the revelation but not the other. And the twist at the end of the chapter was a surprise too.

So what Alice and Edward did was super intrusive. Especially with her there. He should've asked. Bella crossed so many boundaries herself when she tailed him home and when she broke kiss!

So I guessed right on the Oracle's identity. I also figured it was strange that footage from the hospital just suddenly was found. Didn't guess on the connection with Eleazer and Carmen. Wow what am ambush.

Honestly I completely agree with Rosalie. I mean she was harsh and quite rude about it, but she wasn't wrong. I thought that very thing when they arrived there and we were introduced to his friends. Like why would you endanger them all, especially with a child involved. They're quite the incestuous little friend group aren't they. If Bella and Edward make it, and they become a couple, their combined friend group kind of reminds me of the Fleetwood Mac sitch. One big happy family. Sad Edward cut ties with his parents and they turned out to be right. Well actually they cut and ran, abandoning Edward, which is so super sh1tty.

Well I certainly did not guess THAT. I knew there was a story involved with his wife, but I am gleefully surprised because I love being truly shocked by a twist. I did guess about his former occupation. I obviously didn't get the origin of their association. I assumed the tatt was for Boston, but now I have another guess. Now pondering on the circumstances.

I've been really enjoying this fic. I'm not much of a rock fan, but I've been enjoying the references and picking up a bit of knowledge along the way. I also found myself trying to puzzle out your characters, their motives and make sense of certain situations as I read along. Even before *ish hit the fan I thought something was really odd with that Jake, Nessy situation. Why did Ness seem to go out of her way to make sure Bella dressed similar to her. They look so much alike, it started making my wonder at their connection. Gran and Aro... Bella's parents getting killed. Bella's informal, but methodic training. I also have a guess about the B in "Tony's" tattoo.

Oh my dear, ALE, you were gone too soon! It's been years now, but this wonderful story still holds up, and remains a favorite! As you look down on us I hope you know that you are missed, you are loved, and your words will ever be in our fondest memories for all to read as long as FF exists. Thank you for making our world and the fandom a better place! XOXO

Interesting story. Great suspense. The part on clinical trials is mostly well documented. Some elements are slightly inaccurate though. Phase I trials, the majority of them are not run only in one unique phase I site. First to avoid results of one site to potentially jeopardise results a whole trial (like in your story), second the number of patients needed to achieve a result might be too much for only one site and last in a lot of pathology, like cancer, it wouldn’t be ethic to test the investigational drugs on healthy volunteers. In that case, patients will be enrolled instead. Therefore you end up working with hospital sites not specialised phase I units. Also, in 23 years working in clinical research I’ve never seen a phase II trial run in one unique site. Considering the number of clinical trials run every year, I can’t pretend to know about all of them, far from it. However, I can say that if it happens it’s probably very unfrequent. Last, when a site enrolled enough patients that the results of this site “make” the results of the trial, sponsors have to plan for a routine audit to check data validity and avoid Fraud. Last but not least, the vast majority of clinical trials are in double blind settings. So neither the patient nor the physician know what is the drug administrated to this specific patient. So making impossible to cheat on patient’s results to favour one drug. In conclusion, while fraud at a site is possible, and unfortunately had and probably will happen ( that’s why you have audit AND FDA inspection), a systematic process running on years created by investors fund is very unlikely. Great story though :)

How was Edward able to find her twice?