Reviews for Major Misconduct |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. Fantastic fiction. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was just a wonderful read. The right amount of love with a shot of angst. Well written and just a beautiful story. Definately voting for a sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great first date. He really was showing her who he is |
![]() ![]() I loved this story, what a beautiful written. Thanks for sharing it with us.️️️️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() And I get so happy when Angela is part of the friend group, when she's actually Bella's ultimate BFF! These three are all really cute in the story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I never had the pleasure of reading this story after all the years I've been reading Twilight fanfiction. I'm enjoying Bella's inner monologues. And I mostly use the audio function for all of the stories. So I'm listening to chapter 2 and can honestly say that this is the first time I've snorted out loud in a long time to a story! Bella feeling up Edward's leg just makes me giggle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well the Batman reference definitely aged well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goodness I loved these two and happy he’s back on the ice. Lucard is the only thing I’m not pleased with. He got off easy. Sociopaths are criminally intelligent he can fool Psychiatrists and get out. Oh well it doesn’t matter they got the much deserved HEA. Now I’ll finish Edward’s pov. Thank you for this story. I really enjoyed it. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this the only follow up on Lucard? I feel some supreme punishment is n order. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella is a fierce little warrior too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. You are writing my top five Bella/Edward characters out of 5e thousands I’ve read including the original. Truth. I love how fierce they are for each other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SM has got nothing on your Meadow. Jeebus. ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() We'll be careful together, Edward. We'd be so goddamn miserable without each other we wouldn't notice the first thing that was going on around us. We'd be in more trouble, not less." If only SM had made her Bella this smart. You can be shy put passionate and strong. We’ll done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah he’s super crazy because he’s stalking a cops daughter not just Edward’s girl. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So is Lucard first name James? Is he going to be a stalking freak? I hope he didn’t watch them have sex. Loved the way Tanya didn’t send Bella into a runaway spiral. She’s right Tanya is unimaginative. |