Reviews for Major Misconduct
dreampills chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
did you see the two green men who were all up on the penalty box during the nhl game? lol

i don't think we were ever that open about getting laid in high school. ;)
Maddux chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
Oh. Yes. Super fun chapter.
NikkylovesBD chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
Omg they r so cute we better get some lemony goodness at least some kisses or more tonight. Love them!
Raewright chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
This fic is great! You write very cleanly. lol Love E and B but Alice and Jasper are great secondary characters as well. Thanks for writing and sharing!
malyandelida chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
this is great!

i lvoed this chapter.

the way you described bella while she was watching edward was really funnyy!

i loved it!

i cant wait until tuesday!
amg98 chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
That was some hot stuff! Can't wait for the kiss. Thanks for the update.
hotmama4jd chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
Ah, Finally! The hockey game. I would tell you how much I enjoyed it, but I have some sort of drool problem imagining Hockeyward and I'm afraid I will short out my keyboard.
u2shay chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
Sheesh!

I totally think that you have just turned me into a cotton-picking hockey fan!

OMG, that was SO hot! (and yes, I mean that in the valley-girl/Paris Hilton kind of way! LOL *shakes head* What have you brought down to, M?)

Anyhoo, looking forward to promised kiss! (this is where I glare at you in warning-don't go getting any ideas to postpone it any longer!) :)

Oh-and Jasper's psuedo man crush is hilarious! :)

Shay
lotusblomsten chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
:D haha this is geting better and better for each chapter, but NO KISSING? How could you? :S
katmom chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
Good Heavens...wow...just...WOW...

I was just thinking..."Need to answer YOUR reviews"...hope SHE'S typing...

And then...an update!

Gah...and what an update...

I've only been to two hockey games...one was the DREAM TEAM (I'm letting my age show...sigh)...but THIS game? Yeah..wow...

Guess you have to have EDWARD on the team...

LOVED this...and I'm glad others are coming to this story...it's so GOOD!

Thanks, so much, for the shoutout!

Kathie
Nolebucgrl chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
It's about time! Waiting anxiously for next chapter!
Raewright chapter 5 . 4/24/2010
OHG I love Alice!
ButchAndJunior chapter 10 . 4/24/2010
Ah Bella and Edward should've kissed! Your so evil! xD
gitgit chapter 10 . 4/23/2010
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i loved this chapter

:D

i see you have an hockey obsession just like i do

that was a brilliant chapter

and i cant wait to see what happens at the hockey game :D
IcelandGirl812 chapter 10 . 4/23/2010
"As if his desire to touch me was instinctual, unconscious." That bit makes me smile. :)

I'm very interested to find out what his ritual is...

"Taller and bigger and broader...oh my." Hahaha, love 'oh my' lines like that. I probably use 'em far too often in my everyday life though.

"I had never realized the work, effort, and discipline that went into organized sports." Unfortunately, I'm guilty of thinking the same thing most of the time. I'm really really enjoying the awesome dose of real you inject in this here story. :D

"Has she ever seen you skate before, kid?" Oh hell. O_O *dies of the anticipation and fantasizing*

"It was nice to meet you, Edward's Bella." Adorable. Just so fucking adorable I can't stop grinning.

"How could this be? How did I not notice? Was I the stupidest person on earth, or was this some kind of sick joke? And why the hell hadn't Ben said anything?" Lmao, she goes from being mad at herself to being mad at Ben. Soo great!

I love, love love LOVE, that she actually says "Guh?" out loud.

"He was just so close, so warm, so big." It's odd for me to giggle pervily while drooling at the same time. I like it. :D Seriously honey, the UST you write? Fucking amazing. Unf!

"This is a cockblock of cosmic proportions." I want him to say the first part of that fourth word again. ;)

Annd we're back to the amazing UST. Gah, love it, dear! :D
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