Reviews for Major Misconduct
tiderider chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
loved your brain leaking kiss" good old charlie :"}
thanks one of my fav. stories!
jenitwilightfan chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
Holy Shit!That was a smoking hot kiss!..At last, they've kissed.. Charlie is a great cockblocker..lol! So right in time..
This chapter is so good..

Thanks for updating.
notreal17 chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
that was wonderful! and i loved the end with charlie coming to break up the party! so funny! good job!
Nolebucgrl chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
Finally! It was a hot one too. Good for them! I am glad Charlie didn't bust up the makeout session! That might have put a crimp in their style :)
katmom chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
First...let me thank you for NOT letting them get sloppy drunk...pointing out ER doc's son...and Police Chief's daughter...yes, they would be thinking about consequences!

Second...MELTED MY COMPUTER...those KISSES? Total WIN...whew...

SO funny that Charlie is THERE...LOL

Thank you so much for sharing this with us...I love it...

So, we going to start that contest? ;D

Kathie
tinyhobbit chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
Hahaha, I actually thought Charlie was standing outside the car looking at them...that made me laugh...well, he wasn't, but I still found it quite amusing! ) Awesome chapter!
Please update son!
kantstopreading chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
Love the sneaking away and the kiss was HOT. Great chapter.
hotmama4jd chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
Man you are rockin' the updates. Thanks!

I thought for sure Charlie would bust up the party before the kiss! :) Glad i was wrong. love the kissing scenes - poor kids deserve some fun! LMFAO 'bout the porno not having a plot! B/w no plot & crappy music, porn annoys the hell out of me.
wonderingpixie chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
Now this could just be my paranoia, but it seems like Edward isn't completely comfortable being intimate with Bella in public. Distracted by people walking by and headlights flashing, locking themselves away in the bathroom and going out to his car to make out (when people were most likely able to do that in the open at the party), what's up with this? I'm becoming a little wary of our Edward; you hear that, Eddie? I got my eye on you! Excited for the next chapter!
Elbee96 chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
Oh hell yeah. Gawd I loved first kisses...sadly haven't had one in...gulp 14 years... saved by make out! Love it.
A.L. Rules chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
I love hockey, and I love Twilight, so this kinda seems like a match made in heaven for me. Looking forward to where you take this :)
blondieja chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
OH MY GOODNESS! I was so excited to see an update, and what an update it was! YAY! Ok, I'm slowly coming down from my happy high. Love this story. It makes me smile. Thanks so much for sharing. Update on Saturday? Right?

-Jen
ButchAndJunior chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
The first kiss was so much better then I expected! :) more making out in the Volvo please.
mjwpg chapter 12 . 4/27/2010
Hallelujah they finally kissed! Too funny at the end there, making out saved their asses, lol.
Awesome chapter I love this story!
Chicsarah chapter 11 . 4/26/2010
Another great chapter. I love hockeyward in all his glory!
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