Reviews for Major Misconduct
ForeverApril chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
aww, i love this chapter! but i hate that they got inturrupted though lol
Nolebucgrl chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
You're a kisstease! That's not fair! So no, Bella isn't the only one frustrated. Here's hoping they get a nice hot moment on the ice then!
gitgit chapter 9 . 4/17/2010

a big deal indeed

i was waiting for this

now i can go write my exam in a few hours :P

i hate saturday exams

nice chapter!

and they are so cute :D
katmom chapter 9 . 4/17/2010


LOL...this is just so great...

I'm glad your prereaders told you to POST IT!

I love this...really...

Gah...she needs that Disney song playing: Go on and KISS THE GIRL!

Thanks for sharing...

xX.sherri.Xx chapter 8 . 4/16/2010
You had me laughing when Bella mentioned her date with Edward to Charlie and how she told him 'no guns'...and then when he made his way into the family room mumbling to himself...that was too funny!
xX.sherri.Xx chapter 7 . 4/16/2010
I caught on last chapter that during Edward's locker speech to Bella...he mentioned being able to know what people are saying and 'thinking' about him...and now in this chapter how he has a hard time 'reading' her...I love how you put that in this story...even though it a All Human story...very clever to add something SM canon...

And oh...the exchange of phone adorable!
xX.sherri.Xx chapter 6 . 4/16/2010
I'm a little shocked that he didn't ask her to the Homecoming dance again...but I'm thankful that he didn't ask anyone else either...and opted to go to a hockey game with his dad instead.
xX.sherri.Xx chapter 5 . 4/16/2010
I thought is was cute when Edward skipped his Edward nap-time in his car just because he wanted to see Bella...but cleverly disguised it as wanting to see what he had missed in the past couple of days...he may have fooled Bella with his cover up...but I caught it...

Although...Bella seemed to be completely oblivious to all things in this chapter until Alice grabbed her by the ear and set her straight! I'm definitely Team Alice in this chapter! But poor, poor Edward, he's just working too hard...both on and off the ice...
blondieja chapter 8 . 4/16/2010
Found this story yesterday and I absolutely love it. So sweet and funny. Your right though, you are a meanie to leave it there.

Thanks for sharing! Can't wait for the next update!

xX.sherri.Xx chapter 4 . 4/15/2010
Edward holding the door for Bella on the way to Biology...more than once...happy sigh...he's so sweet!

Your Edward is wonderful...he really is...but I got more questions...
louisedmn chapter 8 . 4/15/2010
OMG! Loved this! I love this story. So great.

Can't wait for another.


xX.sherri.Xx chapter 3 . 4/15/2010
Awesome chapter...m...!

I have to give the MVP award to Angela in this chapter! She definitely scored a hat-trick and then some with her witty comments!

This chapter seriously rocked!

And...I have to agree with need to get signed onto twitter...I won't give up...m...I know I hounded you about it during's only gonna get worse...but in a good won't regret it! I promise!
Esli128 chapter 8 . 4/15/2010
ah cute chapter! really liking this story so far and can't wait to read more
xX.sherri.Xx chapter 2 . 4/15/2010
Hand Pass for the title...funny!

A couple other hockey terms comes to mind for this chapter...maybe in the upcoming chapter, eh?
xX.sherri.Xx chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
HEY! It's Sherri...I finally made it over here!

Great introduction into this new story...I'm interested to see what you have planned!

I also realized that I still have the last few chapters to read in Tangled Web...I will do that soon! I promise!
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