Reviews for Major Misconduct
hnwhitlock2000 chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
so cute
hollynn28 chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
That was a great almost first kiss. I could feel Edwards hestiation and fear that Bella would reject him and I could feel Bella's desire for it to move faster. I have really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait for some hockey action.
slyt chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
oh i really loved this chapter Bella is getting so much "braver" should i say and actually finally realizes hey this guy likes me so no more "cock blocking "

BUT OMG STUPID CAR STUPID HEADLIGHTS .. stopping our first kiss with those two...not happy...

maybe they will be "alone" at the rink and they will finally get to kiss...can't wait for next chapter.
Nevaeh09 chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
love it,excellent chapter!
NikkylovesBD chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
I'm frustrated! Ugh I hope they get some alone time at the rink!
notreal17 chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
oh my gosh! the almost kiss! and for him to bring her to his pre-game ritual is huge! i love this story!
amg98 chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
Very sweet and perfect first date. They are just too cute. Thanks for the update.
Chicsarah chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
That was a great chapter. I love how confidently Edward handles Bella. Very satisfying...looking forward to the game and the kiss! Oh, he should win the game and get a big ol' kiss from her!
whimsical daisy chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
Thanks for the update. I loved the almost kiss and their ice cream date.
dreampills chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
i love that it isn't bella who feels the need to let chelsea know that he is taken. ;) nice to see the guy take charge and let everyone know that he is taken.

yea, kiss him already! jeez
xX.sherri.Xx chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
...sigh...their first kiss getting interrupted luck next time...that's when ISG needs to take action and grab him by the shirt and pull him to her quickly before another interruption can happen again...just saying...

But...I think Edward wanting Bella with him for his 'night-before-a-game-visit-to-the-arena-tradition' is the sweetest invitation ever...I can't think of another gesture that would mean more to a sport-playing athlete...

I'm hoping for the best!
FreezingFire81 chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
loved it!:)
Jamieson Zed chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
Excellent chapter. And to answer your question - NO! Bella is NOT the only one frustrated at this point...I agree with her sentiments wholeheartedly: "kiss me already!" (that was simultaneously Bella *and* me shouting that, just for the record p). Can't wait to see what his pre-game ritual is!
hotmama4jd chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
Oh, HS love. It is just one big roller-coaster ride isn't it? So are they not going to kiss at the rink? Those places are COLD...need to snuggle to conserve body heat! He should definitely take her skating. A strong skater can keep a crappy skater upright (I speak from experience) and it is sexy as hell to watch 'em.
ForeverApril chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
aww, i love this chapter! but i hate that they got inturrupted though lol
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