Reviews for Just Desserts
Ian Knight chapter 3 . 1/23/2012
Great story, I really hope there's another chapter, even though it's been almost a year since you updated. I think you have a natural talent for writing, especially considering how well this was done without a beta-reader. I hope to read more of your stories in the future, and I also hope that you post more guyXguy stories like this one.
Harpyquin chapter 3 . 12/12/2011
I cam safely say I love this fic: :3 It's fabulously written and it makes me all warm and squishy inside. XD There's a severe lack of Miles amd Lamg fics out there and I really have to thank you for posting this, just, yay!
andysanime chapter 3 . 7/25/2011
Really good job on this story!
GRIMMInsanity chapter 3 . 5/3/2011
Your story is sensual and realistic.

The characters are, obviously, easy to understand, but you give them a certain life that goes past the series. Interesting and ever so wonderful, I can't help but love this!

I hope you aim to add more as this definitely needs more chapters to continue this story. It would be interesting to see what would happen between the two of them, even further, I mean.

I'll be keeping my eye out for the rest of this story, that's for sure!

With Luv,

Gabriel Mehayel
strictlyninja chapter 3 . 3/26/2011
will you update or is this it? it's soooooo good!
Minako-Akemi chapter 3 . 2/13/2011
Love this fic, really :D I find this couple really hot /

Thanks for the fic

Bye bye
MattsyKun chapter 3 . 2/10/2011
*dies happily*
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Indochine chapter 3 . 2/10/2011
Aww... So HOT! They're both hot! Miles especially but whatever...

I hope you'll update sooner this time! :p
Yuko6754 chapter 3 . 2/10/2011
Aww, Lang got Edgey all sexed out. :3 It was a long wait but it was well worth it. There was a spot near the end where you forgot an apostrophe and you put 'Langs' instead. I think that was the only mistake that I caught though.

:) Hope you can update soon cause I really like this~

Evening Hush96 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
...You did not just leave it hanging there OH MY GOD.

This was amazing I cannot even tell you aksjhhd. It was funny and sexy at the same time (I want to run my hand down Lang's abs goddamnit) and I can tell that you have a good understanding of these characters and their personalities.

I adore Lang and you write him very well, from his body language all the way to the Lang Zi sayings. I love Langworth and it seems to have a very small fanbase so I hope that you continue this wonderful story! :'D
KyuuketsukiNekko chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
That was a horrible place to leave on. :( I really hope you update soon and don't just leave it like this cause God...that was great. I love how you mix humor into all this. :D Love the characterizations, too! Kudos and keep up the good work!

Enith chapter 2 . 9/6/2010
Your writing style is very fun to read. The steamy stuff is well done, but more impressively it isn't out of character (beyond the normal bounds of assuming the characters are gay). You write situations that are fun with characters I can actually consider being dynamic. I think I will check out some of your other stuff as well just because of your writing style. Keep it up!
kittygoth1 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Amazing, and really really hot. This maybe one of the best smut fanfics that i have read in a while, they dont write them like they used to.

Please continue. (or else)

TacoDao chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
you're such a mean person.

i friggin' love you.


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