I love this story I'm reading some of your fics as well you are excellent at keeping the characters believable and engaging

I am loving this soooo much!

I can't describe how amazing and light this is.
So dark to so light.
The contrast between the beginning, middle, and end is blinding.
So much growth and change happened.
This is a fresh powerful plot, not at all stale.

I'm holding on this secret hope that Anakin will some how turn around pick up Obi before it's too late.
Once the rebels get him, it'll be a while before he can do anything about it.

How in the world did I figure out that Obi-Wan was pulling off a self-sacrificing move whe even Anakin didn't?

He starts talking about his plan(genius btw) and I'm like... Distraction? Oh no. I hope I'm imagining things.

Before this story, I didn't have any connection to Obi-Wan, but now I can say that I'm freaking out that he's putting himself in so much danger. I have an attachment to Obi-Wan. Wow.

I just realized something AMAZING about your writing.
You write the characters so well and in their proper personality that I can HEAR their voices whe they talk.

I'm not crazy.

I mean that they are so much themselves, I can hear the actor's with whom I associate the character with voice speaking the words.
I've only found that three times now.
That's MINDBLOWINGLY fantastic.

I applaud your villainous masterpiece.
Just... Wow.
I feel paranoid every time he pops up.
And when he walks into a room with Ani or Obj-I just snap.
I mean, the guy watched Anakin wake up, I was cooing btw, and he was using it to manipulate him in the future!
What kind of monster does that?
He sends dread and terror through me.

His touch is gentle, and Obi-Wan can't help letting his gaze skitter back down, watching those hands smooth the healing patch onto his leg.

CREEPY. Just... WRONG.

I am ridiculously proud of them right now.
But I bet Dooku knows that Anakin knows where the bases are. Even if he doesn't know HOW.

If I could be ANYTHING right this second.
I'd be an assassin. Behind Dooku's back.
With a knife.

Yeah... He's ticked me off. I'm pretty much in cold-blooded-who-touched-my-babies mode.

I'm getting dangerously angry at Dooku.
The clones, I understand.
But Dooku's critsism of Anakin and twisted interest in Obi-Wan is pushing every single one of my buttons.

I'm usually just a lurker and I realize it's probably pointless to review a story so old, but i've been searching for one like this and it's exactly what i've been looking for. I love the relationship between obi-wan and anakin and all their characterizations, including padme. But honestly, the aspect of this story i've most found interesting was the relationship between the clones and the jedi they betrayed. It's something that i feel isn't always explored to it's full extent, but it's such a fascinating part of the story that i often wonder why.

Holy cow.

The movies made Dooku a joke. The 2008 cartoon made him a worthy villain.

This... made him SCARY.

Dooku could (and DID) accurately predict what Anakin and Obi-Wan would do next. He put both Jedi in positions where they would get the other killed if they continued.

He manipulated everything. The only error he made was letting his arrogance blind him to other possibilities.

Dooku is no joke, and this fic proves that.

Awesome job.

A beautifully written story. I loved how you managed to characterise the clones.

Wow that conversation was an amazing way to handle the revelation about the Tusken Camp slaughter. You have their characters down perfectly, and I'm really left to wonder now whether Dooku made a big mistake in leaving the two of them alone to talk after that revelation.

(Also, as a probably way too personal side-note, the conversation between them has given me perspective on some of the things I've been too self-absorbed to see in terms of not getting along with my own mother...woah.)