|Reviews for Of Wolf and Bird|
| tearsofbreaks chapter 4 . 7/5/2013
“ Fourteen tales were wagging and fourteen sweet terrier eyes were pleading for the levitated bowls..” how many are there? “plucked one of the prettiest pens off his back” do you mean feather? Or at least quill; they don’t use pen. There are several more, but It will take too long to list them all. I think you might need a new beta, one that might know more about the HP world?
Otherwise, I still love this story
| tearsofbreaks chapter 3 . 7/5/2013
I really love it, but... please I beg of you, reorganize it. the skipping from harry to draco is leaving me so confused. at the very least, can you please add a line or something so i'd know there is a change in perspective? THANKS! what is an unspeakable?
| LittleMoonlightLover chapter 7 . 1/27/2013
it's a beautiful and well written story
in fact, i'm quiete appalled because it hasn't gotten as much reviews
as i think this story deserves
| DragonArtemis chapter 7 . 10/10/2012
I am so happy I found this fic. I was constantly laughing and gasping and then crying because my stomach hurt from laughing so much. Love the development of the characters, love the snarky snape, love the different relationships, overall just a good fic.
Kudos to you!
| DragonArtemis chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
I'll have you know that I snorted sprite through my nose at the first line of this fic.
I applaud you immensely.
| Drarry Lover chapter 7 . 10/6/2012
That was so strange and yet quite lovely. I must say I really liked how bizarre and orginal the whole story was.
| assassi chapter 7 . 7/17/2012
I LOVED IT, I truly did! Very origal, funny and overall - cool! Well done and keep up! :)
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2012
"How was your day, love?"
"Got some new pets," said Draco dryly. "What have you done?"
"Done?" Harry battered his eyelashes.
"You killed Severus, didn't you?"
"I would never…!" Harry blinked. "Can I…?"
"Fine." He shrugged, adjusting Draco's immaculate collar.
LOVED THAT ONE! :D So far I LOVE that weird story a lot! :) :P
| nekoyoka chapter 6 . 6/7/2012
I have to ask, is there any chance that you watched Sound of Music before/while writing this chapter? white dresses with blue sashes, schnitzel, and brown paper packages tied up with string? Or am I reading between the lines...
| Tikvah chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
I have to admit I'm usually very hesitant when it comes to creature!fics but I'm really liking this so far
Especially Lucius and Narcissa, I can't explain it but they really stole my heart away. Thank you for this great writing - now I'm off to discover what awaits in the next chapter
| SinGrin chapter 7 . 1/6/2012
Well done with the conclusion. I like how you slipped in the nickname 'Love' in Harry's last line subtly revealing to the reader that feelings of trully defined love had been reached. While your spelling needs a bit of work, and your writing style a bit of refining, overall, I found your story satisfying.
| Draco mudiliar chapter 7 . 12/1/2011
even though I am fan of Darry I liked seve in this story.
| kyatariina chapter 7 . 7/30/2011
Enjoyed reading it great story
| CarysPendragon chapter 6 . 3/12/2011
I take it you either like or watched Sound Of Music before you write this XD
Cream colored ponies, white dresses with blue satin sashes, brown paper packages tied up with strings, schnitzel and noodles...these are a few of my favourite things!
Great job :)
| adafrog chapter 7 . 3/12/2011
OMG, this was awesome! Thanks.