Reviews for Alice still in Wonderland
Calm-Waters toolaze chapter 17 . 5/12/2010
hehehe! that was the best! I LOVED IT!
Calm-Waters chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
lol very random XD

AWESOME twins! XD
Agent Aleu chapter 16 . 4/11/2010
AWESOME! more please more. So sweet..
Calm-Waters chapter 15 . 4/10/2010
still too lazy... gwad i have to get that fixed! LOL

this is awesomesaucers! She'll have TWINS? XD HURRAY
Calm-Waters chapter 14 . 4/10/2010
to lazy

LOL awesomesaucerS!
LogicalGoth chapter 7 . 4/6/2010
I'm sorry but I can't read anymore. This is a really good idea. The plot is interesting. However, it is poorly written.

Try adding more action to it. It seems to be only dialogue, in my opinion that throws everything off. Also, the characters seem to be out of... well character, I can't picture Alice being the type of girl that will say "oops".

I am not a flamer, I just think this story has the potential to reach a new height. Please edit it. If you need any help I would be happy to assist you.

Good Luck!
Calm-Waters chapter 13 . 4/6/2010
oh dear... A baby? :D happy days! happy days!
Calm-Waters chapter 12 . 4/4/2010
AW! THIS WAS JUST AS SWEET! :D XD
Calm-Waters chapter 11 . 4/4/2010
AW! THAT'S SO SWEET!
Calm-Waters chapter 10 . 4/3/2010
well, that was unexpected by Helen... LOL :D I wouldn't have thought she'd be that execptable
Calm-Waters chapter 9 . 4/3/2010
wow nice
Kiluca1228 chapter 10 . 4/2/2010
:P Nice story i loved it but you ended it rather abruptly No offense

I loved the story though :P
Calm-Waters chapter 8 . 3/31/2010
aww this is just so cute :D
dapperyklutz chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
pls update soon! :D
Calm-Waters chapter 7 . 3/29/2010
:D hurray! Um... this is going good.. but i really can't think of anything...
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