|Reviews for Unexpected|
| Anarchy chapter 12 . 4/1/2012
Hello, It's me. You might remember me from you're finished story Chase Me. Anyway, I need you to do me a favour. You see there is an author called DarkAhsoka. He/She has a fanfic called The Pleasures of Captivity. I wondering if you could perhaps contact him (or else get someone who can) and ask when he plans on putting it back in the FanFiction Universe.
| OrderlyAnarchist chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
I really enjoyed this story. It's a shame that you're not writing it anymore...
| Mr T FOO chapter 10 . 2/10/2011
Niceeeeeee but your Jokers kind of an asshole
| Athulis chapter 12 . 2/4/2011
Great fic. Interesting and in character. Looking forward to reading more.
| Guardian54 chapter 9 . 8/24/2010
Good... but one minor detail: Quarians have 2 toes on each foot.
| Thomas chapter 4 . 8/24/2010
That should be Reaper IFF here not FTL, just a minor nitpick ;)
| Wiggs Magee chapter 12 . 7/21/2010
| Wiggs Magee chapter 8 . 7/21/2010
Its a brilliant peice of writing but im really not sure this is a Paragon Shepard. He looks to be mainly Renegade.
| Eternal Density chapter 12 . 6/11/2010
that was quite the battle, and an interesting mix of character interactions :D
| Infernal00 chapter 12 . 6/9/2010
I actually enjoyed Chapter 12 more than I thought I would.
The best bit's for me was the talks between Jack & Legion.
| AirKing chapter 12 . 6/6/2010
Really liked the fighting scenes, they were really detailed. I liked the Legion POV, not alot of people do that. Good job, can't wait for the next one.
| Candle in the Night chapter 12 . 6/5/2010
Huge chapter compared to the others, nice work.
I like the interest from Legion and Jack, they are probably as opposite as beings get.
Also the orginality of the whole crew abducion thing is very welcome to see.
| deathunit100010 chapter 11 . 5/25/2010
that was great! i love things like this. hope to see another one soon man
| GreasyKiwi chapter 11 . 5/19/2010
A few things:
First off, this is by far the best fan-fiction I have ever read, I even recommended this to someone and they LOVED it, so congratulations on such an amazing creation.
Secondly, remember that it is the Reaper IFF, not FTL.
I rate your creation 5 out of 5 stars, and recommend this to everyone.
Lastly, would you mind if I upload this to DeviantArt, I will give you full credit, and hopefully it will get you some more viewers. Thanks.
| bharned1 chapter 11 . 4/29/2010
Excellent story! I like the mix of seriousness and humor. The EDI/Joker banter is great! By the way, I saw your note about FEAR 3. I don't know what to think...Fettel and Point Man working together seems a bit odd, but I guess we'll have to wait and see.