|Reviews for Not Her Protector|
| overninethousand chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
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| itachi-kun'slover chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Whoa that captured his personality perfectly. Good job!
| emma chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
very nicely done. The only complaint was that there was some grammar issues that you should be more careful of. Especially when writing in Sesshomaru's POV since he is a character of up most elegance and grace. In action and his words.
Perhaps read through, edit and republish?
Either way, it was a beautiful piece.
| MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
There were many small errors that indicate you should have read it through more carefully, like "hit plight" instead of "his plight," but overall it was good.
| karenlacey97 chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
A profound look into Sess's head. He has no one to protect yeah right! Anyone that tries to touch Rin ends up dead or wishing they were. His heart is in his is his girl and as a dog he is never going to let someone take what is his.A good story you need a beta though they will read your story and help you correct it that is this story's only weak I love the Rin Sesshomaru daddy/daughter fluff pieces. Two Snaps and a Circle This Sesshomaru Has no one to protect! I am still laughing He lives on the river of Denial where admitting his feelings are though heh Lol ;)!
| Sesshomaru's Bakeneko chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
Nice story. A few spelling and grammar errors; the most prominent one is "higher archery" which should be "hierarchy". Still, it's an interesting look into Sesshomaru's head.