Reviews for Phantom Island
severussnape922 chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Quite intresting
zaylo chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
When is the next chapter up? I am sure it is a very good start for a story.
Zay Lo chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
The story is pretty awesome. When is the next chapter is up?
Terminal10 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
I agree with starystarynights. You were adding too much in the first chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
Ok
DragonlordR chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Whew, finally something that's decent! This is actually better than all the nonsense I find for this book series. And I had to laugh first thing there was the mention of a mouse "whose sense of fashion was completely shot and had used at least 20 air-sickness bags". You got the rest of the characters accurately! Now time for me to contribute to the artworks... by doing something clean!
Pastimes chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Write more, darn it!
Crystalwhisper chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Well, the starting was quite nice, continue! And I can't say that I enjoyed it though, too short...
starystarynights chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
good how you portray all the characters you may be adding a little too much in the first chapter but having said that the size is good the wording is intelligent and I hope you update soon )
TwilightEdwardLover21 chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
stupid?
KatnissMellark4Everr chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Gr8 story loved it write more please.
Amber Stone chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
You left it hanging you loser and i hate cliffhangers sis.