Reviews for Where Loyalties Lie!
Witch08 chapter 10 . 5/6/2014
Update!
silfire chapter 4 . 10/8/2013
0.0 o... mg.
TheCakeIsALie chapter 6 . 9/22/2013
Very unfortunate Seeker designation:
Windbreaker
*giggles* Came to me as soon as you suggested coming up with Seeker names...my processor is so glitched...
elzi lioneye chapter 5 . 3/28/2013
the amount of grammar mistakes & stilted dialogue in this is very distracting. the word you're looking for is "definitely," not "defiantly." you DEFINITELY need a beta reader. you were the beta reader for a really great fic i read earlier this week & know i understand the mistakes that i found in it. otherwise, an interesting story as long as i can bounce my mind over all the errors.
Alissa the gummybear chapter 10 . 9/1/2010
I would very much like to read more of this
truefaith.truedestiny.truelove chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Finally! After searching for ages I finally, finally found you.

You little glitch...you gave me the completely wrong name... I've just spent ages searching for you (not really, I just feel like saying that, you know to get more symphaty- scratch that as if you could be symphatitic, you evil being)... do you know how many other people have STARSCREAM in their names. I only knew this was you, Minty, because of the deviant art address.

Your story looks good, I couldn't see any of the grammatical mistakes your so famous for making, nor any spelling errors (suprise! suprise! English class is finally paying off!). All that being said I didn't actually read it. Heaven's no! God, Minty did you actually think I would spare (waste) precious moments of my time reading your Transformer stuff? These eyes read Naruto only!

OMG... what if this is the completely wrong person... Ah, well, I'll take my chances.

Later, Minty Freshness.

P.s Thanks for coming last Thursday... I felt it was obligational that I tell you that. Oh and yeah about that video of you... I wasn't lying when I said I'd put it on the internet :) (Check Youtube) Yes Minty, hang your head in shame... think of it as payback for forgetting... again.

...Look on the bright side at least I reviewed...sorta
anony chapter 9 . 8/8/2010
really good and all.. but its hard to read. so i'm done. .
liz chapter 10 . 8/7/2010
I hope you will finish...I am intrigued as to how this will end. I have to admit I am having a bit of trouble following the plot line.
Yukiko-Angel chapter 9 . 6/29/2010
Wow this is great :D Found this after you started to post on deviantart and well came looking for other stories. It is fantastic! I want moooooore please!
Saberfrost chapter 9 . 4/1/2010
Come on Megatron!

Hurry Up!

Ah the suspense is killing me!
Jurasi chapter 9 . 3/31/2010
You are kind because you update fast!

No, I'm not patient. But good fics are worth waiting, so even if it would take few months to update I would still be reading this.
Fire-red-bird chapter 9 . 3/30/2010
Heehee!Sorry, I’m loving the story and the fast updates. :) It saddens me when I find a really good story and the author just quits in the middle of it. I am not a writer but I so love reading stories from very talented people. Keep up the good work. Did you get your last vote yet?
grimlock47 chapter 9 . 3/30/2010
this is making sense now. TC snarling at Megatron was funny :)

lol. i just kid when i call u evil. i was reviewing as i finished each chapter i missed. i figured later that he wasnt realy dead though, lol. i didnt know u liked chocolates so much, lol. im srry 4 teasing u :) *hands over a big box of chocolates*

update soon pweez. i like this story :)
HighxOnxCrack chapter 8 . 3/30/2010
Haha thats alot of names! I reapeated each one saying "Hi! My Name is _, and I_" like i was applying for a job.

"Hi! My name is Moonstalker! I Stalk the Moon."

"Hi! My name is sizzlewing! My wings sizzle."

HA! these two cracked me up! :D I hope you use them.
Fire-red-bird chapter 8 . 3/29/2010
I did, I don’t know why it showed in ch. 4? I thought I posted in ch. 6. Oh well. I did read ch. 7 and ch. 8, LOL! I voted! :) (do I get to wear the “I voted” sticker?) Can’t wait for more! Loving it!
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