|Reviews for A Second Chance|
| FranceHufflepuff chapter 12 . 4/23
Honestly this is a good story, but the narratives and long conversations are making me bored. Why don't you try describing how they look like, what they wear, the place they're in. Instead of the loooong narratives and different characters' perspectives. I'm sorry but I can't read anymore. If this was a bread, this was overbaked.
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/22
How on earth did pomfrey know that cedrics body was cleansing itself from killing curse?
| KyloRen'sgirl213 chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
Loving this work
| LillianMarie2 chapter 12 . 6/15/2017
when are you going to do the continuation of this story?
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/16/2017
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/16/2017
Hm. Do you think you could write a spin off of sorts, where Hermione is offered to jump to third year in her first? She doesn't really know Gred and Forge, and hasn't made any friends, and thinks that a challenge would be good for her? Maybe it's still Cedmione! That'd be cool. And she had a power of compassion, although if it was Cedmione she'd be making ripples in the timeline so who would she save...? Well if it was a spinoff she'd still have it.
Sorry if you don't want to or I accidentally gave you a plot bunny. I may not know what it's like being overrun by them (since I write them down but I don't write them out. I tend to run from them) but I've seen many authors make so many fics that were brilliant and unfinished; pushed aside for more brilliant fics!
But as I was saying, sorry but I've never read a (halfway decent) fic where Hermione skips years (TO ANYONE READING THIS, if you know any good ones where she skips a few, please tell me at my account VanillaMilkshake18, I'd be very grateful), and going into the twins' year? Pure madness.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/16/2017
So frustrated wondering when he'll realise...
| LCB chapter 12 . 12/18/2016
| LCB chapter 11 . 12/18/2016
Ahhhh oh man!
| LCB chapter 10 . 12/18/2016
That went way better than it could have.
| LCB chapter 9 . 12/18/2016
Oh wow. Awesome.
| LCB chapter 8 . 12/18/2016
| LCB chapter 7 . 12/18/2016
| LCB chapter 6 . 12/18/2016
| LCB chapter 5 . 12/18/2016