|Reviews for Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost|
| lizf22 chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
OMG, Papa Charlie! That little peek into the past was so sweet! Lovely start, thank you. xo
| RobandKrisChick chapter 4 . 2/7/2011
Charlie finally got a clue to go on but now where to turn or who is the question.
| RobandKrisChick chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
I guess Charlie got a few more answers which probably gave him more questions.
| SeanEmma4Evr chapter 4 . 2/7/2011
I'm concerned about the wait, but thus far I'm liking this story. The characterization of Charlie is spot-on.
I love the early moments between him and Bella.
| RobandKrisChick chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
Well now he is trying ti find the Cullen's but will he succeed or just get the runaround.
| RobandKrisChick chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Great start. Already loving it.
| rosalindleconte chapter 4 . 2/5/2011
So glad to see you are back with this great story! I cannot imagine any circumstance where Charlie would accept a 'death scene' no matter how accurately or expertly staged. My CSI and Quincy bones are all in red alert dying to see what you have come up with. And the reunion, ahh...Can't wait!
I too have been off the grid but now am just surfacing. Had surgery on Jan 11, 2011, so I am almost 4 weeks out and hopefully, Ascension new chapter will be appearing in the next week! Only one more post after this one before we shift to Part II-the changing and beyond!
Take care... kindergarten to middle school... Yikes! Calgon baths take me away!
| eibbil chapter 4 . 2/5/2011
I loved this line like mad: "I'd be locked up faster than I could say "Coo-coo for Cocoa Puffs.""
Now the happy and sad moment. I'm caught up but I want more, darn it all! Especially now that Charlie's got the little piece of confirmation he needed. Broke my heart, watching him go over the file and the pictures, and remembering that horrible day - but made me giddy, too, when he found the missing picture.
Can't wait for more, obviously!
| eibbil chapter 3 . 2/5/2011
Wow! So much in one chapter! Rachel's reticence, and Jake's questioning. I loved his casual pose and careful prodding for information (Side note - Shirtless Mafia killed me dead). I'm trying to figure out his motives in questioning Charlie - to see what he's figured out? Or to help him as much as he can with Sam's muzzle in effect.
Gah! I'm all bouncy want more and then :( that there's only one more chapter til I'm caught up.
Doesn't matter - I'm riveted and (mostly) patient.
| eibbil chapter 2 . 2/5/2011
Dead from Adorable!Charlie. His struggle with the letter just warmed my heart. I loved all the fits and starts as his thoughts went 'round and 'round about how he was going to start on this, to his mind, insane journey.
And I feel SO bad for Sue - guilt over what she knows keeping her from the man she likes/maybe more? I'm gonna plant my little shipper flag and hope that goes somewhere.
Oh yeah, and I got the smiles when I could hear Bella prodding Alice in the phone calls - making sure he was eating. The smiles, and the heartfails, too, of course. Poor Bells. She really does love her daddy.
| eibbil chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Remember that Charlie love? Increased exponentially after the prologue. I can just see him talking to bbBella in her crib like that (and can see Renee buying her a stuffed monster ;) ) Totally loved that scene.
And now...we're off to the races, or fact finding trips, as the case may be.
| superheartyou chapter 4 . 2/4/2011
This story is great! I love seeing Charlie try to figure it all out.
| rockstarvampire chapter 4 . 2/4/2011
Oh man, I am really liking this. It's nice to see the long path taken to figure everything out. Of course, I want to know what happens next like there's no tomorrow and will wait patiently for udates. Fantastic storytelling. I was right there with Charlie and smiling along as he caught clues. :)
| lindyrb chapter 4 . 2/4/2011
SO glad to see this story continued! What a rich, exciting plot idea. Can't wait to see how Charlie works to solve the issue...and how the Cullens react.
| rockstarvampire chapter 3 . 10/12/2010
I love stories where Charlie gets to be on the inside with the secrets and everything. Having him work so hard at figuring it all out just makes it that much better. I really like how you've written him. He's exactly as I would imagine. Can't wait for the next update!