|Reviews for The Elevator Floor|
| Tiva Bade Cavanaugh chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I absolutely love this! You have a great eye for missing moments:)
| Catmint chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Cute, sweet and adorable!
| NCISaddict77 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
This actually...makes sense. It fits perfectly! Amazing story!
| LunaZola chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Wow, I love love loved this. So sweet and funny and just happy. It's an interesting view to that episode; that there was so so much more than we saw. :D
| Silvergrass chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
WHOO! it made my day. thanks for posting it.
| Viper003 chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
I really enjoyed it! Great job )
| zatl chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
I agree people need to write more of these.
Great job. : )
| MoveForward chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
I like this tag better than all the others...
| nancystagerat chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
Oh, very cute without being OOC for either of them :) That's difficult to pull off with Tiva, especially with the agonizing pace their relationship's been building at for the past four or so seasons. I have to say I started out skeptical in the beginning, thinking that Ziva of all people wouldn't be so careless as to leave clothing behind. That to me was jarring, something she would notice right off the bat. But your writing style is clean and polished (a rare thing to find on ffnet, so bravo!) and I kept going. The farther I got the more it ended up working for me, especially after thinking about what Jet Lag seems to have set up for Tony and Ziva and us poor saps who desperately want to see them together.
The dialogue you wrote them was also very true to form and worked well. So well in fact that I found myself thinking it in their voices in my head as if I was listening to the actors themselves. Then I went back to try and pick out things I particularly liked to stick in this review, and your Gibbs' use of the evidence bag was something that really shone to me. Very clever, subtle and yet forward enough to be a very Gibbs thing to do. I also liked the affection you had Ziva show Tony at the end. Their banter felt real, and you wrapped things up nicely. One thing I would have done differently would be leaving Ziva's line at "You are my best friend. My...boyfriend." I feel like that confession in and of itself would have been enough to elicit the reaction you wrote for Tony. Ziva's use of the word "boyfriend" I think would have conveyed the depth of her feeling without her needing to put the rest into words. "Boyfriend" to me seems like a very un-Ziva thing to call a lover of hers, and her using it just for Tony I think would be jarring to him and convey all the rest without his really needing to hear it.
Overall though, this is a very solid little fic, and it just shines. Now I'm off to check if you have any other little gems like this one floating around :) Really nice work.
| SMFAHForLife chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
I was wondering about that! This is really, really, really good!
| bendecida82 chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
I didnt even notice Gibbs blaming the lost keys on Ziva! Good missing scene! I also liked your explanation of why they were watching a movie at the office instead of at the apts. I do so enjoy these little tidbits they throw at us every other week! Hopefully more post-eps will be sparked as yours was.
| Betherzz chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
loved it... very cute
| LittleCatt chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
This was a really cute story. I love how you took the scene at the beginning and ran with it; the back story was hilarious and the follow up after the end scene was great. I too am surprised there aren't more one-shots after Jurisdiction. Your story was both funny and sweet, and I definitely enjoyed reading it. Great job! And congrats being done with finals!
| HookEmHornsTX chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
That's just sweet. I like it. You're right, I'm surprised there aren't many post fics for this...
Excellent job! Keep up the good work!
| pia chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
i thought that was cute, keep up the good work.