|Reviews for A Voice in the Wind|
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 8 . 16h
Well this was another interesting chapter I love NaruSaku so much I like this bonding and glad Sakura's getting stronger and Naruto/Katsuro is learning from her also. I like how there talking more and bonding. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm wondering what will happen the next time Sakura's not with Naruto/Katsuro, Some of the things Naruto says makes sense to me and she should listen to him.
| CozyJinx chapter 41 . 3/17
It's been a long time since I've read anything Naruto-related, much less Naruto fandom things. However, this story just blew me away completely.
While your writing style was off-putting at first-in that I was confused about what was going on the scenes-it really grew on me. Though, that's
probably me more than you and a result of not reading any fiction in the past few years (I blame college lol). By chapter five, I was absolutely
in love with how you describe the scenery and characterize Naruto and Sakura. Your writing has a very distinct style reminiscent of those Asian paintings
(much like the one Sakura and Naruto saw way back in the abandoned temple). It's a weird way to compare your writing, but I mean it in a good way (I think).
In many scenes, you "paint" the background and then drop the characters in.
I also love that you revisit plot points constantly. The two that come to mind at the moment are (1) the old man who Naruto initially meets but has no
money and (2) Sakura's distrust of Naruto in chapter 26 as a result of his withholding of information.
I was so glad when Naruto met the old man again! It also really drove in the point that even though Naruto is in a better spot with regards to finance and power,
he's lonelier than ever. (Well, minus the goons that are following him around lol)
In the preview, Sakura mentions several times she can't trust Naruto because he refuses to tell much about himself, which was basically what Katsuro did.
And he ended up "betraying" her in the end, which rightfully makes her suspicious of Naruto because of what she suffered through in the past. It shows
character growth, which is something I generally don't see in fanfictions. Don't get me wrong. A lot of stories on here are awesome, but very few
focus on actual character development. And while that's okay, it really allowed me to develop an attachment to *your* characters. I can still recognize
them as Naruto as Sakura, but they're still very different because they're going through different experiences.
I also noticed Sakura was skipping rocks right before Sasuke kisses her. For some reason, I foreshadowed some romance occurring. Either because of the
mood or because in the earlier chapters, Naruto and Sakura skip rocks, and Naruto ends up giving Sakura some pointers.
| yugewinner chapter 41 . 3/16
the first half of the story is great. after Naruto walked Sakura to konoha and didnt go in the story definitely got worse but maybe it'll get better soon
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 7 . 3/16
Well this was interesting some bonding moments still this Konoha is fucked up or it's just Naruto/Katsuro's thinking
| yugewinner chapter 22 . 3/16
after so many fics with shitty grammar this is a fucking breath of fresh air
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 6 . 3/16
Well this was interesting and now I know he has a transformation Jutsu on it makes sense still he should kill that lanky bastard
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 5 . 3/16
Well This was interesting although if Naruto is Katsuro why does he have brown eyes and brown hair it's weird
| Eterina chapter 41 . 3/16
I binge-read this entire thing! This story really is amazing! Thank you for writing :)
| Guest chapter 35 . 3/13
Ya know i was all team Katsuro but now im not sure
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 4 . 3/15
Well this was interesting Sakura really put Naruto/Katsuro in his place kind of amusing
| Alie chapter 24 . 3/12
Really love this story :) Katsuro is great, and the way Sasuke and Sakura hate each other and have to work at teambuilding is a nice twist on the story.
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 3 . 3/14
Well this was interesting Konoha is really different in this story a corrupt Konoha but maybe I'm wrong. I can't wait for what happens next
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 2 . 3/13
Well this was interesting but where's Naruto dammit
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 3/13
Well this was interesting and different Sasgay's still an ass I see
| Guest chapter 41 . 3/6
Thanks for updating!:)