Reviews for Nice Boy
TheWayTheFeatherFalls chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
that is so sad. i wish i could write like you, that made me cry
Becablanca chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Aww.
A Quill For Fiction chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
I love it! So sweet! :)
Marie with the Glasses chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
I really liked this story. It was very well written and quite sweet.

I only really have one thing to mention, and that is your paragraphs. I would suggest perhaps breaking up your one paragraph and turning it into two or three just because it reads better and is easier on the eyes.

Over all though, it was well thought out and put together, you're an amazing writer, so keep writing!
Hidden Traces chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
I love it! It's rather sad...
I love Neville chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I love the stories that show what Alice is thinking. They're so sad, but also interesting.
hi chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
that was the most in-depth story i've ever read. great job
scoobygal chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
That was so sad! Good job. :'(
RavenEcho chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Love it! Very accurate representation, in my opinion! :)
SpangleyPony chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
Very well written, can't tell you if you captured Alice or not as I have no idea, thank God, what it is to be mentally injured but I like your version of her. Your vision that she knows enough to want to understand but can't is heartbreaking as she is forced to live in her own head. Keep up the writing.