|Reviews for Not All Who Wander Are Lost|
| theshipbebop chapter 1 . 6/29
This was a short story, and only followed Kino through barly 1 day. I really liked how you set it up, Hermes is missing, everyone is suspicious, kino plays it cool and goes serching. Thats all fine, altho the story kind of looses speed at around here. The reveal as to why there are no machines has the Kinos journey feel, you nailed that, the story couldve benefited from a little more info about the subject. But overall nice work, I was sorta expecting some sort dialoge talking about how not all who wander are lost, but its definitly a nice title. The story was a little thin along with elements to keep the suspense going, and remember, a little dose of constructive criticism, is the best type of criticism.
| The Blue Footed Booby chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Good. Exploring and defining the unique relationship between Kino and Hermes always yields interesting dialogue. The peculiar nature of the Land of Parts needs further exploration. Just how deep does that rabbit hole go?
More please, and longer.