Reviews for Bella Swan, This Is Your Life
lynzylee chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Excellent stroy. I am sure some people will say it is crap. The thing that makes it great is that for some people this is a reality. So sad but so true. Thanks for writing this.
sophie921 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Whoah...that was just so sad, it reeked of depression. Where do we send the flowers?
lambcullen chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
So sad... thank you!

xx
sessahhh chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Talk about a dark fic and all around crappy life. It's a wonder there weren't drugs involved. Good luck in the contest - there's enough angst in this one to fill three more stories.
ZooeyD chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
So very sad story...
cclore chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
So tragic and sad.

And I know what it took for you to write it, cupcake.

A dark o/s but beautifully written. :)
CRAZYCARE4 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Gah what a great one shot b/c I'm in tears again. Why I keep reading these black balloon entries I'll never know. All imdo is cry after many of them. But most are great stories just very sad and dark. Thank you
PhoenixMP3 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
tough stuff to deal with...

but very well done

:)
D Pattinson chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
ok, wow! This was seriously sad, bb. No one should have to put up with all that. I've never heard of this contest, but apparently this was not just written to make me cry in my extremely emotional state. And for that I am grateful, but I am also worried about you in the fact that you had to live through this while you were writing it. I suppose I can't blame Bella at the end for killing herself, I just wish she could have found one person redeeming enough in her life to help her or hold her hand. That is what made me the most sad. I hope you do well in this competition. Forgive me for not checking out your competition, but I don't know if I could bare reading all these depressing one-shots. Love you dearly, though!

xoxo,

Dee
5ctBauble chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
WOW!

I didny know what the constest was about...

But this o/s was so depressing but written so well!

She really got dealt all the bad cards.

very very well done!
Black Balloon Contest chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Thank you for entering. Your fic has now been validated.

Good Luck

x
Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
HOLY SH*T, lady. Talk about a major downer! I mean, I know that's the whole purpose of the damn contest in the first place, but - UGH!

-Q
roosnana chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Amazing story...a suicide note on a very bad life. It happens though, terrible, but true. You hit the nail on the head with this one hun. Great job!
ClancyJane chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
if its tears you wanted... mission accomplished : (

so well written and so very sad...

good luck in the contest ; )
Cullenary chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
jeezuz that was sad but I so was thinkin it was a suicide letter about midway-I wish she'd had the courage to walk away and start a new life with a new identity...so very, very sad...thanks for sharing..xoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoox