Reviews for Imperfect Metamorphosis
Hazard 567 chapter 70 . 3/22
Before I pay my respects to the former and fallen Outer God, as she dramatically went out like a total boss in this. I'd like to say that this is one of the most brutal works of Fiction I have ever read and I absolutely love it. Some characters were kind of downplayed when they're actually put into fighting, but eh, what can you do? It's a shame that there will be no continuation from this and your works, cause it would be awesome to see where this goes, but oh well. Top shelf work though. Thanks for the excellent read and hope to see you continue this brilliant legacy.
Guest chapter 31 . 2/14
Not even halfway through, and the fourth wall is needing repairs. I hope that this is plot relevent.
Pink Pidgeon chapter 31 . 2/10
I thought i had pretty idea what is going on and some theories in my mind what i have been proven so of nowhere outer if that wasnt enough that 4th wall break in the thing to describe what i read is mind fucked.
11/10 would read again.
Guest chapter 70 . 12/10/2017
4 months later and I have absolutely no regrets whatsoever. Words cannot describe how much I anticipate the next update (even though it may be far off). Thank you so much for this!
Guest chapter 69 . 8/12/2017
"thou wisheth"

Should be "thou wishest".

"Yukari held up the gem that contained Yuuka's marveling at how much brighter"

You accidentally a.
Zeren chapter 70 . 7/21/2017
Heya. I just finished reading your story and I'm completely floored.

I've recently decided to delve deeper into the Touhou fandom and have consumed massive amounts of fan art, videos, memes, wiki pages and all sorts of doujinshi in my wicked path of obsession. And when I stumbled upon your fanfic with 1.2m words, all I could do was bounce up and down in anticipation of some good-old literature slamming into my masochistic brain. Needless to say, I'm absolutely satisfied and am experiencing some well deserved post-fanfic depression.

I had to look up some stuff and read up on some character wiki pages while reading through. Doing so made me get a bigger picture of Gensokyo and all the fancy stuff that surrounds it, for that I owe you my gratitude. Reading your story has made me delve into Touhou a LOT deeper, and I'm definitely enjoying every step I'm taking deep into this magical rabbit hole.

I've shed a few tears, grinned in excitement, gasped upon horror lots of times throughout every chapter. Lots of emotions got invoked while reading, aye. And you know what, I'm starting to think that I'm an absolute sucker for suffering. Suffering you've definitely delivered, straight through my heart with a wooden stake peppered with Mordite. Ouch.

I wish you good luck upon your future projects. Keep up the good work!

that ending though, damn
Komecko chapter 70 . 6/7/2017
I just read this over the last month.

It is by far the single best fan fiction in the Touhou fandom, and should be recognized as such. The characterization is the best done, though this could be due to the length. It's the longest. It's the cleanest in terms of grammar, it has the best plot, even with its occasional idiot balls. The fights are well choreographed and have real punch behind them, with each move having consequences and the like. It's really something to see. I personally love Yuuka Kazami and so I loved her as a villain, she was just oodles of fun to see, and I loved how you finally beat her, it made it so ironic and so satisfying. I do hope Mima ends up making her see some humility, even though she's a villain and portrayed as unredeemable I think for her, redemption is realizing her own mortality and own "filth" so to speak, even if that means being Mima's puppet. I loved Mima or Yuuka the most, but adored absolutely every character, even Yukari, who I usually hate for being the Deus Ex Machina.

The Gensokyo you built was majestic in its violence yet peacefulness. It seems when the chips fall down Gensokyo is a pretty bloody place, but there are still plenty of good guys to do what needs to be done.

Thanks for writing this man, I'll definitely read some of your new stuff as well.
Shibito chapter 70 . 2/9/2017
Absolutely Beautiful.

I must say, Beginning this story on the start, I thought such that it would end up as a Self-Insert of someone with alarmingly powerful abilities that played out a Mary-Sue story, and I confess, I was dead wrong.

The weaving of such a story to leave me in Suspense, As well as the intincing feeling that there would always be more trouble as the story continued to lead me along a turn of twists and suprises, That even a reader as such like me, Who has read for a solid 7 years of my life, Did not expect, And for that I congratulate you.

You have made a story I would openly buy for cash to continue reading, And my only two remaining problems for this are the slightly drawn out Yuuka scenes, And the fact that there will probably be a stall in content.

I wish you luck on your next big project, and hope you continue to write on this story as well as make your next one just as fabulous and a journey as this has been.

Until next time, Foxx.
~Shibito
jtblion chapter 70 . 1/2/2017
Whew. That was an intense chapter.
That interrupted author's note is creepy though...
Don't leave me on a cliffhanger like this!
EspurrTheGreat chapter 70 . 1/2/2017
Oh boy oh boy, hina has the angel now. Its been fun reading this story, even if I've only been here since last year. Congrats on finishing this and good luck with your book.
Firefox178 chapter 70 . 1/2/2017
I knew it. That Fallen Angel is still lurking about. Always thought that getting rid of it was too easy. And it looks like Rin found her parents grave. That is another gut punch to her when she finds out.
StupidityNowOffersWisdom chapter 70 . 1/2/2017
Congrats on finishing IM! Loved the fic ever since I started reading it from chapter 20ish or so. That ending sounded so very much like the prelude to a sequel, but hey, you have other goals and stuff you wanna tackle, so let's not go there.

Will definitely stay tuned for your future work!
Crazy Scion chapter 70 . 1/2/2017
I was not here at the very beginning, but I have been here for several years. This is one of my favorite stories, and I will gladly read the next chapter no matter how long it takes.
Ancestor's Dragon chapter 70 . 1/1/2017
Well, and that's a wrap. Thank you so much for you continued work. You have no idea how much it makes my day to see one of your fics updated. Still see shit about to go down (dammit Sakuya), but it's finally gotten a breather. It's weird to have a chapter where there isn't impending doom that we weren't expecting (Shadow Rumia doesn't count, we all knew this was coming, haha). Also nice to see Yukari giving some slack. Satori's reunion was probably the one heartwarming moment in this epilogue. Rin's scene was close, but having her find what's probably her parents made that sadder.
Anyways, wonderful wonderful job with this story, and I think you for sharing it with us. Subconscious sounds like it'll be a riot to read as well.
Thank you again and I look forward to reading your next work/update! Good luck, God bless, and Happy New Year!
kinigget chapter 70 . 1/1/2017
Well hell man. Best of luck to you, and I'll definitely be checking out your stuff when you get it out

And I friggin *knew* we hadn't seen the last of the Shadow Youkai

So that'll be fun
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