Reviews for An Unexpected Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is so beautiful, thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Grammar is quite bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not the youngest shinobi with a flee on sight order, the ONLY shinobi. |
![]() ![]() yeeesssss reviews DEFINETLY have you write faster *wink* *wink* |
![]() ![]() I. Think. Tiny. Naruto. is. THE MOST CUTEST THING EVER TO EXIST! You have my utmost respect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mano já estou amando! parabéns |
![]() ![]() ![]() Therefore that thing called limits *sigh* was only here cause Minato lived ...oh well Ja ne |
![]() ![]() ![]() brooo it was fluffy sure but he is currently a toddler who in their right mind ships TODDLERS (internal age included)...then again strange world out there with stranger ppl *shrug* maybe the warning is legit |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this. Though I wish it had a proper ending because I just noticed the sequel is unfinished :C |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I can't stop reading and that was intense! |
![]() ![]() This is the best |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wait... Isn't Naruto in his twenties in this chapter? And his heart is speeding up looking at a very very young Hinata... ehe te nandayo!? omae wa mou shindeiru *calls fbi* Hehe expect to hear *Fbi open up!* soon at your doorstep. Have a nice day |
![]() ![]() ![]() pedophilia is a no go from me. thanks for the badly written Mary Sue, it was kinda fun until now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a Mary Sue. That being said, I love it |