Reviews for An Unexpected Beginning
VinniVVicci chapter 32 . 8/14
Haha, I didn't realize that there was more chapters, thank you for giving me these heavenly words on screen. You write really good, and its pretty funny too! 10/10
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27
So many fake guest reviews :/
Guest chapter 2 . 7/26
You say you're pretty good at catching mistakes, but I could found at least ten glaring errors :/ Go back and fix them ugh.
VinniVVicci chapter 20 . 7/22
upd8 8ro! i need this 8ook, i want more updates, its so good, i just wanna read more T-T
VinniVVicci chapter 18 . 7/22
-_- -~~~~~() the awesomeness of this book astounds me
VinniVVicci chapter 11 . 7/21
VinniVVicci chapter 7 . 7/21
I can actually see this in my head- it means your a good author
VinniVVicci chapter 4 . 7/21
TheStillLoner chapter 32 . 7/18
it was a really lovely story.
Xaviera Agnia chapter 12 . 6/27
... i think its supposed to be kitsune kage bunshin no jutsu, coz japan didnt work like english. but, ur storys urs so m nt gonna cmplain. like this chpptr btw
Darknessfairy3564 chapter 2 . 6/6
Reality check chapter 5 . 5/22
It's bad enough that you guys got a fanfic movie based on Naruto fanfics called Naruto's last movie the fact that you have to still like to have a fanfic is kind of sad he is why your parents will never happen in an actual Naruto anime. Plus even if he did return her feelings it could not actually go anywhere, I feel that all those stories where they fall in love and get married are actually pretty unrealistic (aside from the fact that it happens within the span of five seconds). While the manga does not up and say it, the fact that every Hyuuga looks like every other Hyuuga means that they practice inbreeding (Incest), as heir to the Hyuuga clan Hinata would never be allowed to marry outside of said clan (plus the elders would never allow the Byakugan to belong to another clan) just keep that in mind when you guys watch Naruto's fanfic based movie or right now Naruto fanfics
Reality check chapter 3 . 5/22
I don't need to read the end of this go back and rewrite it just my suggestion state trooper with most Naruto Naruto have the nine tails pulled out by Obito Uchiha nine tail pull from kushina it's much more believable that way just a suggestion
Reality check chapter 2 . 5/22
I'll wait to read the rest of the story before I make you a review but so far you're right it seems pretty good but I shouldn't be one to judge at the end I'll tell you what I think
Guest chapter 29 . 2/27
loving the omake(s)
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