Reviews for An Unexpected Beginning |
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![]() ![]() I love it |
![]() ![]() By "dipper" and "dripper" I think you meant "diaper" That being said, this has the potential to be, ah... good, I suppose, but you really need to work on your grammar and the random changing of tenses (because even when you announce the POV you don't stick by it). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. Love the relationship between Naruto and Minato! :) |
![]() ![]() Man, Minato really let himself go! Srsly he has a seal on Naruto AND could flash all around the Uchiha compound just by throwing some kunai around... i.e. could get things done in seconds and remind everyone why there's a "flee on sight" notice on his from the war! (and, of course, shadow clones ftw - Naruto doesn't have monopoly on those) :P |
![]() ![]() ffff so hard to read with this annoying format (with POV switching constantly and every action/event spelled out unnecessarily; would be better if stayed in Naru's POV so at least had a little mystery as to what Minato is actually thinking/planning)... but I wana know what happens later, arrggg :c |
![]() ![]() Awesome story! Looking forward to the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did a clone manage to renew a blood seal? Please tell me, thanks. |
![]() ![]() "Shizune holding her portable bacon" XD oh man you made my day ... and you made me hungry |
![]() ![]() oh poor kashi kun XD oh this omake is awesome and toddler naru is genius but to defend kakashi, naru had at that point of time 20 years worth live experience love it ... as usua l |
![]() ![]() oh oh oh i've got am idea of what they wanna do... will they summon jiraia to mount whatever so he could get his memories back just like the way it happen with the toads awesome chapter |
![]() ![]() there you have it minato , your son surpassed you and mastered your own jutstu and improved it i always felt like if minato and kushina just could see how their son did the impossible in so small amount of time with so little or even non help. their faces would be priceless love this chapter just as always |
![]() ![]() i like the way you solved the massacre problem, it's probably one of the nicer ways to get it over also madaras appearing was very interesting nice chapter |
![]() ![]() whoa thats some evil cliffy but still good chapter love it |
![]() ![]() "Minato quickly dodged the SHRUNKEN that was being throw at him" XD sorry just couldn't stop to giggle at that one you probably meant shuriken please don'T take it as offense , i just couldn't help it and had some fit of laughter (especially after a looked up the meaning of it, since the vocable felt familiar ) oh and by the way nice chapter as always |
![]() ![]() itachi! i like him not 'cuz of looks or coolness or something but for the way he cares for his brother and his kind and polite character |