Reviews for An Unexpected Beginning |
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![]() ![]() Hmmm *slithers off to read that sequel asap* |
![]() ![]() Ahahahahahaha I'm gonna enjoy those omakes. *dodges the romantic fluff* eek ewe |
![]() ![]() TEACHER-STUDENT CONFIDENTIALITY, aka no parent intervention allowed :3 XDDD Speaking of... we haven't seen much of Kakashi in this fic. Isn't it time to prank him specifically? Lol |
![]() ![]() Rip teachers XD |
![]() ![]() TwT such a touching moment |
![]() ![]() What would Minato think if his son suddenly got terrible grades? Poor man |
![]() ![]() There had to be a point for Sasuke seeing that. *peels eyes for more* |
![]() ![]() Lol I wonder what the others thought of the prank |
![]() ![]() *attempts to skip all the romance* *fails and lands in the middle of one scene* ack! Ughhhhhhh Really wish you'd keep it gen, but other than that still enjoying it. As long as it doesn't get too shippy. Hilarious crush is one thing, actual romance is another. |
![]() ![]() Hmm not bad. Your writing in general is a lot like describing a screen action though, rather than the book style I'd expect in pure text. Oh well. Imagine this though: we all know Sasuke had a fan club with Sakura being very obviously one of the fangirls. Well, in your story, Naruto is hella strong (duh) and known as the Hokage's son. So what would his reaction be if Sakura became HIS fangirl in this timeline? XDDDDD I feel like that'd be some sort of karmic punishment lmao Justathought. On to next chapter. |
![]() ![]() Ooooh this is gonna be good. |
![]() ![]() ... who is the genius that would pair Jiraiya and baby Naruto? That's wrong on so many levels. I don't think that scene would be a cause for concern in the first place, but my mind isn't a yaoi goldmine. It was adorable thought :3 As was the entire chapter. I love it. I love the story. XD |
![]() ![]() I've just finished reading this story, and I have to say that I'm sorry that you finished it this way. It is a great story, thank you for your time and efforts spent writing it. Now I just have to find the sequel... Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story but it seems like nobody other than Minato knows how advanced Naruto is and I would think more people would have noticed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I smiled all throughout this story. Many thanks! |