Reviews for An Unexpected Beginning
Guest chapter 31 . 4/5/2019
Hmmm *slithers off to read that sequel asap*
Guest chapter 28 . 4/5/2019
Ahahahahahaha I'm gonna enjoy those omakes.
*dodges the romantic fluff* eek ewe
Guest chapter 24 . 4/5/2019
TEACHER-STUDENT CONFIDENTIALITY, aka no parent intervention allowed :3 XDDD
Speaking of... we haven't seen much of Kakashi in this fic. Isn't it time to prank him specifically? Lol
Guest chapter 23 . 4/5/2019
Rip teachers XD
Guest chapter 18 . 4/5/2019
TwT such a touching moment
Guest chapter 13 . 4/5/2019
What would Minato think if his son suddenly got terrible grades? Poor man
Guest chapter 12 . 4/5/2019
There had to be a point for Sasuke seeing that. *peels eyes for more*
Guest chapter 11 . 4/5/2019
Lol
I wonder what the others thought of the prank
Guest chapter 10 . 4/5/2019
*attempts to skip all the romance* *fails and lands in the middle of one scene* ack! Ughhhhhhh
Really wish you'd keep it gen, but other than that still enjoying it. As long as it doesn't get too shippy. Hilarious crush is one thing, actual romance is another.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/5/2019
Hmm not bad. Your writing in general is a lot like describing a screen action though, rather than the book style I'd expect in pure text.
Oh well.

Imagine this though: we all know Sasuke had a fan club with Sakura being very obviously one of the fangirls. Well, in your story, Naruto is hella strong (duh) and known as the Hokage's son. So what would his reaction be if Sakura became HIS fangirl in this timeline? XDDDDD I feel like that'd be some sort of karmic punishment lmao
Justathought. On to next chapter.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/5/2019
Ooooh this is gonna be good.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/5/2019
... who is the genius that would pair Jiraiya and baby Naruto? That's wrong on so many levels. I don't think that scene would be a cause for concern in the first place, but my mind isn't a yaoi goldmine. It was adorable thought :3
As was the entire chapter. I love it. I love the story. XD
Pucusi81 chapter 32 . 3/9/2019
I've just finished reading this story, and I have to say that I'm sorry that you finished it this way. It is a great story, thank you for your time and efforts spent writing it. Now I just have to find the sequel... Lol
lara5170 chapter 15 . 1/24/2019
This is a good story but it seems like nobody other than Minato knows how advanced Naruto is and I would think more people would have noticed.
we.can.fly.away.to.Gallifrey chapter 32 . 1/6/2019
I smiled all throughout this story. Many thanks!
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