Reviews for The second try for the chuunin exams
warrior371 chapter 2 . 4/23/2010
Jas is a Nerd chapter 2 . 4/10/2010
yay! I like this story! Update soon! (unlike me...-_-')
1arigato chapter 2 . 4/9/2010
Har har, update.
DarkVampirePrincess8 chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
HaHAHAH loved it! xD xD

It was awesome! xD
Rhea.Lament chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
This chapter's rather short.. I think that the language you use is gives that impression that the narrator is a teenager, which isn't very effective for third party point of view writing style. The character of the narrator is very prominent. However, If you were to make it a first person narration, that will solve the problem, you could then use the teenage slang to your advantage.

I also think that the starting is rather abrupt... Or maybe it's just me. I look forward to the further development of your characters! I like it when fanfictions include original characters, it makes for a more interesting read.