|Reviews for Dear Agony|
| Featherfreak chapter 6 . 4/16/2014
Great story plot, very interested to see where it goes.
| Michonyx chapter 9 . 11/17/2013
Please tell me it isn't over. Will Emmett and Jasper make up? I hope you update soon.
| PurplePixie143 chapter 9 . 4/3/2013
WAhhhhhhh :( why is there no more? *pouts* I LOVE THIS!
| Lupin4Tonks chapter 9 . 7/1/2012
This is such a touching story. Last chapter's sex scene was so raw, but so ... I don't know ... it tugged on my heart. Even made me cry. I just wanna envelope Emmett in a big bear hug. I do agree with what Jasper did. But I'm worried what it'll do to Emmett. The way he wished he and Rosalie never separated. I can't help but feel he'll wish that again.
| ArekWhitlock chapter 9 . 6/30/2012
I love this story..
| angeliena chapter 8 . 6/20/2011
| angeliena chapter 9 . 6/20/2011
Oh my this is a difficult story, but I like it. I hope you will update soon.
| Cuteloopie2 chapter 9 . 4/6/2011
I just found this story. It is wonderful. I look forward to reading more.
| LA91 chapter 9 . 4/1/2011
I really like this. update soon :)
| JasperLuver48 chapter 9 . 3/24/2011
im so glad that Em finally took a step toward helping himself. Jasper deserves someone who will love him back the way he gives his love and I hope he hasn't given up all hope on Em!
Ur doing such a great job with this story... I can literally feel Em's pain
| RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
I love story plots like this.
Very sad story. I love the main characters.
Love the story.
Please continue soon.
| Robpfan chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Sorry if i'm being nosey hun, but something as felt off for a while with you... now you've closed your twitter account, I know because we followed each other. And I can't pm you and now i'm worried about you...
At the very least, could you please just pm me back and tell me to Fuk off and stop bugging you. Or i'm a really good listener if you need to talk... please, i'm worried...
| JaceDamian23 chapter 9 . 2/15/2011
I wanted to let you know that I loved this story so much. I am excited for more and I hope you come back with more sometime soon!
this story was so sad. So angsty and emotional...my favorite type of story.
I felt awful for Emmett and even Jasper. What a terrible thing for someone to have to go thru. I kinda wish that Bella didn't die though...then Jasper and Emmett could have raised her together...instead of years later if they want a kid in the future (when and if they get back together) They find some girl to have a child for them...
BUt even though I just said that with bella dead it is even more sadder..and as I just said I love sad stories...I can always tell how brilliant of a writer is if they make me break down in tears or ALMOST due...I am one of those people that cry at such random stupid shit for no reason at all (Like a baby) and when something sad happens I have trouble crying. And I honestly did NOT cry but while I read part one I almost broke down in tears and thru out the story I did. So to me your a wonderful writer. I really enjoyed reading this. It was a great story plot. I love how Emmett is the main character (I can't find many good slash Emmett stories...) And I Love him with Jasper so I wish I could find more stories with them together.
I do feel bad for Edward though because he really liked Jasper and they dated for several weeks and been sleeping together and Jasper just calls him the next morning after fucking him...that its over, he wants Emmett. Kinda heartless.
BUT I don't like how Edward went and yelled at Emmett and punched him. Because he used to be Emmetts doctor and Emmett is grieving and Edward knows what happened..he was the guys doctor...but then again Emmett stopped his treatment and set the guys up...its his fault that Edward got his hopes up and that those two dated and slept together...if he was not afraid of admitting his feelings or kissing him earlier then they would have never dated. Still upset that Edward was hurt.
Especially because I was guessing that Edward was the one that was buying those flowers. BUT edward was not at the funeral, they didn't know him at that time and Roses and Lillies were at the funeral and those are the two types that are being boughten. So I was hoping it was Edward now I can't figure out who it is.
Also where is Jake? Em and Rose split up for half of a year and Em stayed with Jake...they are obviously GOOD friends...nine chapters with no Jake...its been almost a year..maybe even a whole year actually that ROse and Bella died...
Also I wish that Jaspers parents stayed behind so that all four of them to grieve together or at least call or send a letter...they lost their kid and their grandchild well Emmett lost his daughter and Wife...I'm sure Jasper told him how Emmett was barely coping for along time and when he seemed to be going good he went back to square one. I would have liked them to send him a letter or calling him or sending him flowers or coming for a visit at least.
Thank god Jasper was there.
But ya really I would have at least loved it if Jacob comes into the story...I won't lie I am a little disappointed that he has not been around at all. His best friend lost his family and was miserable.
Love how Emmett finally went to get help...sucks that he lost Jasper though...though to be honest I don't see why Jasper did not FORCE Emmett to go sooner...and Emmett basically told him he wanted to kill himself, he slaps him, tell him he loves and hates him the same amount and moves out without sending him to rehab or anything. THOUGH it is true that if Emmett really wants help he will get it himself.
BTW I am glad that you made Bella the daughter and not a friend in this because I am not a huge Bella fan and I am glad she isn't in the story. Though as I said above if you had Bella live then I still would have read it and loved it because I don't mind a toddler Bella. Grown up Bella can be annoying.
Well I rambled enough please come back with more.
can't wait for them to speak together.
PLEASE tell us who places flowers on the grave soon. I am going crazy. haah
| mycrookedsmile chapter 9 . 2/14/2011
I hope Chief Swan and his copstache make further appearances ;)
Oh, man. It sucks that Edward was collateral damage. It's kind of scary how Jasper threw himself into caring for Emmett, acting like they really did have a he thought if they just lived it he could make it so, despite how fucked up Em was. In a way, I'm glad that Em trying to kill himself woke Jasper up to the reality of the situation.
Sounds like Em hit rock bottom... hopefully he will make amends with some people on his way back up.
| Curiosity62 chapter 9 . 2/12/2011
As hard as it is, I am glad Emmett took this step forward.
It's pity about Jasper and Edward, it was very sad.
Thanks for taking the time to write.